Guys, I have developed my new site http://www.shahbazqadri.com This is site related to solving problems with spirituality. All kinds of problems are solved including business, love, marriage, education, health, kids, pregnancy, jobs, games, future, etc. Please give your feedback about site? Is this reasonable and good? How I can improve my site? Thanks Manager ShahbazQadri
The site's design feels very outdated and the graphics are not that very attractive. Try to invest some more money/time on those things and it will in return boost your site's credibility. Good luck!
I don't like the design of the website, it looks too dated. There are too much content on the front page. Why is the menu tab on top of the banner? good luck.
I think you people are talking too much text as follows: Right? It looks I need to remove this then home page will be more neat? Manager ShahbazQadri
I find a lot of incorrect English. I also find a lot of sentence fragments. Here are a few examples. Free and in depth spiritual analysis or assessment of your problem 25 years experienced spiritual scholar Look into your future or past, know who did something bad with you No borders and No religion restrictions, services across the border Contact for any problem except death Money back guarantee if we are fail in solving your problem We charge only if we can solve your problem after free spiritual assessment Life time guarantee of solution of your problem (according to nature of case) Phone support available Heart disease medical cases are guaranteed to solve I suggest you take blocks of text like this copy and paste into word and use their grammar and spell check to clean it up. I looked around and found it pretty much rampant throughout the site. I don't think I miss my guess that you are from a foreign country. That's OK but you need to write properly for your audience. An English speaking audience. You communicate alright but It is like me trying to create a website for Mexico. I don't know the language or sentence structure. With Microsoft word you can fix it and become better at English. Good luck and may God be with you.