Please review my site, I have updated it.

Discussion in 'Websites' started by cowsgonemadd3, Jan 3, 2009.

  1. #1
    So it has been a while since I have asked for a review and I have added more stuff to the site.

    Give me any pointers you have and alert me of any problems.

    What do you think?

    http://www.yeastmoney.com
     
    cowsgonemadd3, Jan 3, 2009 IP
  2. hmansfield

    hmansfield Guest

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    #2
    Just your average "Make money online" blog.
    Nothing special about it, the design is not that great.

    if you are giving tips to help others, shouldn't your design be "Kick ass" ?
     
    hmansfield, Jan 4, 2009 IP
  3. river

    river Active Member

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    #3
    I would reword this: "Enter your email address and get a email when new posts are posted:" to "Get Email Updates"
     
    river, Jan 4, 2009 IP
  4. cowsgonemadd3

    cowsgonemadd3 Well-Known Member

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    #4
    Kick A@@ is a poor statement.
    Anyways what would make it better than the rest? Honestly what do you see that I could do to stand out?

    I don't have a lot of money for the design so I am doing it myself.

    I will change the feedburner statement also.
    Any other tips would be great.
     
    cowsgonemadd3, Jan 4, 2009 IP
  5. rahul_seo

    rahul_seo Peon

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    #5
    Hello,
    Your site has less information about how to make money.
    The information should be in detail.
     
    rahul_seo, Jan 4, 2009 IP
  6. hmansfield

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    #6
    I should be asking YOU these questions. Honestly, I am not trying to be mean, but...if you have a "Make Money Online" blog, shouldn't you be the expert ?

    How are you going to attract readers with helpful and informative content to help them make money, if you are asking us?

    One of your posts is "How to start your own website and make money with it." and this is one of the last lines in the post:
    "
    I can’t cover everything on this post but if you do a little looking around you can find all the info you need to get a site up and running on the internet"


    I think that you should write a blog about a subject matter that you know about. You cannot make money rehashing basic information, or re-writing other peoples stuff.

    Better to be a big fish in a small pond, than a small fish in a big one.
     
    hmansfield, Jan 5, 2009 IP
  7. kingofsanda

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    To make the blog look more appealing you should get a more professional template,
    a logo, and add more graphics to the page.
     
    kingofsanda, Jan 5, 2009 IP
  8. cowsgonemadd3

    cowsgonemadd3 Well-Known Member

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    #8
    That is true and so far I have only written about stuff I KNOW about. The methods on my site I have used myself.
     
    cowsgonemadd3, Jan 5, 2009 IP