Please review my site: How to make a website

Discussion in 'Websites' started by lajocar, Jul 15, 2007.

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  1. pangea

    pangea Guest

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    #21
    I would use the text


    rather than your

    Just to drive the message about the website's title home that little bit more.

    Apart from that, good!
     
    pangea, Jul 22, 2007 IP
  2. Kyunn

    Kyunn Active Member

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    #22
    I like everything but the domain, try and think of a way to shorten it up a bit.
     
    Kyunn, Jul 22, 2007 IP
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    RogerDodgr Well-Known Member

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    #23
    Just a little grammar suggestion:
    "Beginners Tutorials For How To Make A Website"
    should use apostrophe s ('s)
    "Beginner's Tutorials For How To Make A Website"
    ----
    Still sounds awkward
    Maybe this sound better? --> "Beginner's tutorial: how to make a website"
    OR
    "A beginner's tutorial for constructing a website."
    "A beginner's tutorial for constructing a webpage."
    "A beginner's tutorials for constructing webpages."

    I tend to obsess over word choice.
     
    RogerDodgr, Jul 22, 2007 IP
  4. ranjuse

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    #24
    Pls dont use dark colors on your site.. and keep an eye on designing
     
    ranjuse, Jul 23, 2007 IP
  5. lajocar

    lajocar Banned

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    #25
    I'm going to redesign the whole site
     
    lajocar, Jul 23, 2007 IP
  6. Kaiser Soze

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    #26
    How about some video tutorials? You can use camstasia studio which is pretty cool and easy to use.
     
    Kaiser Soze, Jul 23, 2007 IP
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    #27
    The domain has too many hyphens.

    Regarding the actual Web layout, and content etc. you might want to check out 2createawebsite.com, to take example from them :)
     
    directoryfire, Jul 23, 2007 IP
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    #28
    hmm I like its nice and simple and thorough - but it cam up weird in my firefox
     
    ianternet, Jul 23, 2007 IP
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    #29
    Very nice site, don't see why adsense would improve the quality of the website or maybe he ment " add a tutorial on adsense?... "
     
    nemo1980, Jul 25, 2007 IP
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    #30
    flashy. maybe you can take it to the next step and add some ajaxy tutorial thingie and/ or php.
     
    4xbizexec, Jul 25, 2007 IP
  11. lajocar

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    #31
    Thanks, I will add some more video tutorials as I go along.

    I will have xhtml, css, php, javascript and ajax tutorials on this site
    You will also be able to create your website on the site and show it to your friends.

    I will redesign the whole layout and improve it.

    :)
     
    lajocar, Jul 25, 2007 IP
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    mirturk Active Member

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    #32
    Simple and cool design also profitable. Congrats.
     
    mirturk, Jul 25, 2007 IP
  13. Western

    Western Well-Known Member

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    #33
    great idea
    which cms you used on it?
    is it custom?
     
    Western, Jul 26, 2007 IP
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