Please review my site for design & seo

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by visionwf, Dec 16, 2009.

  1. #1
    Could someone have a look at my window film website and let me know what your thoughts are from a design point of view and also an SEO point of view? Any tips would be much appreciated
     
    visionwf, Dec 16, 2009 IP
  2. ~kev~

    ~kev~ Well-Known Member

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    #2
    The site is a little "heavy" - just the header image is 126.52 KB. The recommended homepage should be no larger then 100kb - and just the header image is that big.

    The first thing that I thought about with the name of the website was films for the windows operating system, such as a windows movie or something. It was not until I read some of the content that I realized your talking about car window tinting.

    The meta description is ok, but you might have used the word "windows" a little too much

     
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  3. giorgioarmani

    giorgioarmani Well-Known Member

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    Don't take this personal but for my taste it is somewhat overloaded...

    Regarding SEO, have you considered using Wordpress?
     
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  4. ~XerXesDigital.Com~

    ~XerXesDigital.Com~ Peon

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    Yes, its look likes that you spamming the keyword, overall your site was great mate...congrats
     
    ~XerXesDigital.Com~, Dec 16, 2009 IP
  5. mkda

    mkda Active Member

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    It's a bit too orange, especially on a high res monitor. Darken or make the background lighter.

    The payment info at the bottom: make it fit on 1 line.
     
    mkda, Dec 16, 2009 IP
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    netdriver788 Well-Known Member

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    The template and layout looks very professional with attractive design and color schemes and it was fast in loading too.
     
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  7. visionwf

    visionwf Member

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    Thanks for the reviews, someone else had mentioned that its keyword heavy on the word window hopever the problem that Ive got is that Im not targetting windsow at all, however everything I am targetting are phrases that include window ie. window film, window tint, window tinting, car window tinting, car window tint, even the name of the films - solar window film, privacy window film. Without using the word window film it wont be explaining the product. Can you think of any way around it so it doesnt look too spammy?
     
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  8. Johnhanks

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    Cool site, i liked it.....
     
    Johnhanks, Dec 17, 2009 IP
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    The colour scheme provides an overall eye-candy. The page is little "heavy" as said and takes some lag when loading in a dialup connection.
     
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  10. semebyar234

    semebyar234 Greenhorn

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    #10
    look profesional dude :)
     
    semebyar234, Dec 17, 2009 IP
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    cool site good image
     
    pooja chawla, Dec 19, 2009 IP
  12. toni ayis

    toni ayis Member

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    Good your site,
    your logo is also very interesting,
    overall I liked it...:)
     
    toni ayis, Jan 1, 2010 IP
  13. saurabhj

    saurabhj Banned

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    Just saw your site everything was good but ALT tag is missing in some images add that.

    Overall everything was perfect good work..
     
    saurabhj, Jan 1, 2010 IP
  14. vipplaymates

    vipplaymates Greenhorn

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    I think its just fine for the uk


    You mite want to try different size text but its easy to get around accessable .

    thumbs up i reckon

    xx
     
    vipplaymates, Jan 2, 2010 IP