Please review my site : design site

Discussion in 'Websites' started by ariefsyu, Feb 22, 2010.

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    Hello DPers,

    Please take a look at my site, www.27thIsland.com. Don't be hesitate to give me a critiques.

    I will give a good rep for someone who spends his/her time to review my site.

    Best Regards,
    Arief
     
    ariefsyu, Feb 22, 2010 IP
  2. themaximilian

    themaximilian Member

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    I like the headings on your website. The font type looks good! Further, I'm jealous of the tweet displayer. You should probably move that more to the top because the articles that are on the right side on the homepage are also displayed in the main content which makes it look kinda odd. On the other pages (when you are viewing an article, the sidebar thingy is very useful to switch between posts. Maybe you should consider shortening the summary text on the right side a little bit so that there are more articles on less space to catch the visitors attention directly.

    On the services and contacts pages I'd recommend adding some photos. Maybe of how you work on the PC or maybe the crew/you at the work desk(s). The portfolio page is well done, even tho it's a bit short. You could present your latest work in a large picture (directly shown) together with a small text on who it was for and how much time it took to create it etc.

    Overall, I really like your site! Good work.
     
    themaximilian, Feb 22, 2010 IP
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    Simple but nice design, you should provide some colorful design. On contact pages I recommend adding some photos and try present your latest work in a large picture with the history of the job.
     
    themeswarehouse, Feb 23, 2010 IP