Please review my site , Battlenix.com

Discussion in 'Websites' started by BNix, May 20, 2006.

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    Hi , I'm just released my new site yesterday , It is in beta. 6 Months in developing
    www.battlenix.com , Is there any suggestion on how to get traffic about this site ?
    Thanks in advance
     
    BNix, May 20, 2006 IP
  2. phillip.skinner

    phillip.skinner Active Member

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    Hello Berserker
    I think you need more information to what you are actually selling on your site ... you might want to think with-in this mind-set ... imagine someone searching for your type of opportunity or information, what key words or phrases would they stick in google ... then if and when they land on your site what content rich information could you offer them to want to hang for a while feel they have value = time?
    ... take there itchy finger off the eject button lean forward with trance fixed interest with what you want to share with them and will save them the trouble of surfing off into the matrix black hole STILL looking for information you did not satisfy there interest with!

    ... if you get that part right your one of goggles team players and you will not have to worry about traffic as much as your need to worry about making your webpage even more informative like a directory .... Google does the traffic sending you do the capture your suspects thirst for knowledge bit.... Think spider.... Think fly... Think Trap!

    Good Luck
    PS: Check out my thread here a cool tool could make you drool
    http://forums.digitalpoint.com/showthread.php?t=84572
     
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  3. BNix

    BNix Peon

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    Thanks , Sorry It's my mistake
    I forgot about it , It is Web based MMORPG
     
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  4. waffles

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    The fact that your page scrolls when it loads is a bit weird. But there's bigger problems than that.

    Your login box puxhes everything down. Try to find a way to have it not do that. I'd lose the background where you type stuff in. It's also pretty much understood that your password is encrypted, so there's no reason to mention that unless you know it'll make the people visiting feel better. And there's really no reason at all to have the lock pictures that I can see.

    Right by the login box, there's a link that says to see the battle nexus again. The only reason I know it's a link is because my mouse happened to go over it and some colors changed. At least I think it's a link. It makes the page reload. I hope the people visiting will understand why that needs to be there.

    Your table under that is pretty good. No problems there with colors, etc.

    The test is a different story. Capital letters are used for proper nouns and the start of a sentance. Not for random words in a sentance, and certainly not for entire words that would not be capitolized anyway.

    Ads are for banners and stuff, not in your text. "Want to get targeted ads and earn easy money on your site ?
    Check out Google Adsense by click 'Firefox and Referral' at footer of page. It's easy !" is bad. And no space before punctuation.

    I think you have a few words mixed up too. "Cause of security method" is different from "Because of security method."

    Same thing with under that. Except I noticed that you're saying to get Firefox (which is good) with the Google toolbar. Why? Does Google toolbar make this work any better? If you're audience understands that then it's ok, but otherwise you might want to clear up why you're even mentioning it.

    In the other table you have 3 cells with no information. Either put something there or remove them.

    You have a lot of things that are links, but I only know they're links because when I review sites I put the mouse over every bit of text. The visitor probably won't do that.

    There are a few things that are off gramatically, by a lot. One of which is "If you're already using Latest Firefox but problem presist. Please report the error to webmaster below" First part is a major sentance fragment. And there is no webmaster below to report to.

    Honestly, if you want traffic you'll have to have a good site. And I think you've got a ways to go with it. A nice place to work from, and none of the fixes should be too hard. But it is a lot of stuff that I think you need to fix.
     
    waffles, May 20, 2006 IP
  5. BNix

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    Thanks a lot ! , Sorry for my bad english. I'll solve it as soon as possible
    (report error is the feedback/report)
     
    BNix, May 20, 2006 IP