Please review my simple website

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    AdrianLiang, Apr 25, 2007 IP
  2. Jasonb

    Jasonb Well-Known Member

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    #2
    looks good i like the icons and stuff. now its time to SEO! :D
     
    Jasonb, Apr 25, 2007 IP
  3. RovingCalypso

    RovingCalypso Well-Known Member

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    #3
    Nice and clean design, but change the white background, feels incomplete.
     
    RovingCalypso, Apr 25, 2007 IP
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    #4
    For the header, enlarge the logo and minimize the blogger, etc icons to the right of it. The logo should be the one that stands out more..
     
    8everything, Apr 25, 2007 IP
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    #5
    Could the images of each bike point to their respective product description?

    On the product page, I'm having to scroll right to see all the products and not all the bikes are shot on a white background. The product images should have a consistent background, IMHO.

    For the main page, I think a white background and current content is fine - I would just consider making the whole thing bigger to kill some of the white space on the sides. You could enlarge the logo and the bike images down to the fold since that is the true focus.
     
    delani, Apr 25, 2007 IP
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    #6
    Looks nice, but I would recommand you to put some more text on yoiur indexsite, for seo reasons.
     
    Michelangelo, Apr 26, 2007 IP
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    #7
    I like its simplicity... You could put a product title below or above it for faster reference. The company profile could be relocated to another page... The first thing you want to do here is to advertise your products. You could even put the price and model number...:)
     
    danmbuen, Apr 26, 2007 IP
  8. abixalmon

    abixalmon Well-Known Member

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    #8
    I m concerned about this icons you are using
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    Are you not scared of getting sued!!! :p
     
    abixalmon, Apr 26, 2007 IP
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    Yeah, I gotta agree with abixalmon, you must change the icons. If you were linking to google talk or Blogger, they might be okay with it. But just lifting their design for your own use is probably a no-no.

    Additionally, with such a nice design, I think those icons look horrible there. Of course, I'm a typical "mac-user, gimme gradients, translucence, rounded corners, and reflections" type guy, but I still think you could do much better than those icons.

    Other than that, not too bad.
     
    mtheoryx, Apr 26, 2007 IP
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    #10
    Very clean design. It looks like you put a lot of time into this. Make sure your images are trademark free if you haven't already.
     
    Innovative Content, Apr 26, 2007 IP
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    OK,i will change the icon which got from google...:)
     
    AdrianLiang, Apr 30, 2007 IP
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    #12
    Your logo seems to have lost quality due to resolution or jpg compression.
     
    luckybee, Apr 30, 2007 IP
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    thank you, i notice that
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    AdrianLiang, Apr 30, 2007 IP
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    Product description will gives more information for the visitor and increasing SEO as well. I don't know with your screen resolution, but for my screen (1024x768) the text I think to small and hard to read.
     
    T1pt2p, May 1, 2007 IP