Please review my services business site

Hi
recently, i made one sites for services business, i dont know what people says about this site. if review saying Bad, then i change theme with other themes. but, if reviews saying look good. Then i try to using this theme to my websites

Please help me review this site :
onlinetoolservice(dot)com
Thanks,

 

Site is just good enough.
I suggest you to load more valuable contents and also get popular you sites.

 

Your site keyword is good and designing also good and add more images please.

 

Your site is not loading so i can't able to review it. Sorry for that.

 

Thanks for your review ,, i will fill my sites with full content

Thanks for review , images will ready add to my sites

 

logo is ugly
the picture with the pen and ink is duplicate on more posts.
i see "Lorem Ipsum dolor sit amet is just dummy text" on the first slide
2/10

 

Naturally, this site just create and not yet compeleted. then, i ask review from Gurus
Thanks for Review, i will re-create logo and clean it later ..