Please review my self-help web-site :-)

Discussion in 'Websites' started by dvchaos, Mar 24, 2014.

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    Located over at :>

    http://god-of-the-mind.com/

    Any feedback welcomed (Good or bad) :)

    Regards,
    Tom Brett.
     
    dvchaos, Mar 24, 2014 IP
  2. yogayog

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    Hi Tom. I liked the website. A good simple website in white background. In my opinion, try to add colors to the theme. The Blue looks perfect with white background. But, check if you can use few more to it.
     
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    dvchaos Well-Known Member

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    Hi Yogayog ......
    Thanks for your appreciated input. :)

    I changed it around a bit according to your helpful comments.

    Is this > http://god-of-the-mind.com/
    Any Better?

    Regards,
    Tom Brett.
     
    dvchaos, Mar 24, 2014 IP
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    Rado_ch Well-Known Member

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    Hey there, let me share a few pointers too.

    - I think you tried to stuff your keywords all over the website and that replaces the real content. From your HomePage, to the About Us, everything is about keywords with very little content apart of it. It gives very little about your services and can confuse visitors. Your HomePage is something like a short introduction but nothing more. Try to add more content, be more compelling, explain what is the benefit for the user clearly.
    - Header and Footer are one and the same menu. I think it will be better if you put the TOS and Privacy Policy separately in the footer
    - You have at least 2 (or 3) active plugins for social sharing. That just makes a clutter of things doing the same function. Choose 1 plugin and stick with it (also the fewer the plugins - the faster and more secure the website
    - Having a counter is nice, but this one looks a little too much (at least for me). Its too shiny, moving, and not in the good way :)
    - I would completely change the About Us page to something really interesting about you (or your company). Include pictures and entertaining info and it will work in your favor
    - You seem like someone pretty concerned with SEO if I am correct, however your choice of domain could be better. Having hyphens and numbers in the domain name not only brings you zero SEO value, but can also confuse potential visitors and make it harder for you to verbally advertize your website

    Sorry if I am being too critical, just trying to help ;)
     
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    Hi Tom, Glad that you took the inputs very positively. I will have a check one more time and let you know what can be done to have a more attractive design.
     
    yogayog, Mar 25, 2014 IP