Please review my scarsdale diet squidoo lens!

Discussion in 'Websites' started by videos, Aug 21, 2008.

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    Hi- I just joined squidoo to make a weight-loss lens about the scarsdale diet and support the scarsdale diet website in my signature here. It is my very first attempt at making a lens so be gentle with me but I was just looking for some feedback on it and just generally what peoples opinions are for my first try. Thanks very much!
     
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    bobbylove321 Active Member

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    It's not bad, but it looks very simple. I would suggest much more content to be put up.
     
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    videos Peon

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    Hi- thanks for taking the time to give me your suggestions. I know it's pretty basic but like I said i just joined the site so i have yet to really figure out all the modules etc. but I will keep at it. Thanks-

     
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    I agree, put up a little more content. You can also make it look more attractive by using subtitles in your content and then make them bold. You might also want t put your title (or sub-title right above the article - that space seems empty.
     
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    Hmmm, ok... good tips. Yeah, once I get some time i will have to actually get into playing around with the actual HTML instead of just dealing with the modules. Thanks-

     
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