Are you actually seen on those sites? just wondering cus its kind of illegal to say that your seen on such sites unless you have a disclaimer saying something like you are not affiliated with and those are used only for promotional purposes... but i guess it depends on where you live i know the US is cracking down slowly on it and some of the EU laws also moving up on this issue... Your sales page looks a bit basic to me: Your AS SEEN bit is not a high quality image did you do a copy an paste job to make that :S You also have a bunch of colours: Blue, red, yellow, orange and green. You want to stay away from using so many diffrent colours go for compliment colours for example: Deep blues go with purple and red light blues go with 1 strong colour and deeper blues People can read so the highlighing it just making it look cheap again to me... You could do with having the gold 60 day money back star and you dont have a lot of information on the sales page whats the product made up of? is it hebal or informational? is it a guide on how to deal with or does it just tell you the process. Is this ebook a secret herbal remedy or what >.> if im askign the question they sure are... "Learn The Secrets That Dermatologists Do Not Want YOU To Know! " Thats poor in my head, dermatologists will tell you everything, heck they carry out expensive injections to try and fix issues. Your page looks more like a car dealers would then the product owners... in fact with such a claim id like to know if you have experiance in this field XD Your price is also only said once for $34.95! ... why dont you go for: 49.99 (strike it through) $34.95! You could also mention the money back thing a few more times. But this is my view as an affiliate and, from experiance, a poor sales page doesnt sell... i think its dominate mafia wars? one of the mafia wars that doesnt even say the blooming price >.> ive made sales but ive had to make the price overly clear in my presale pages (well i used ctrl + f and looked for $ and couldnt find it soooooo) erm: Higher quality images more information about the product point out price more make the page look clean with simple matching colours GET A PROFESSIONAL to do it? OFC if you dont want to make a lot of money and get affilaite behind you that will struggle to sell for you, to make you a profit then i guess dont bother doing those things. You need to spend money to make money and this looks like a [I did it all by myself job]. my $0.02 cents...
I would also say you need way more content on that site to compete in clickbank. It didn't say much. Read your ebook and take important points from it and use that. I love the header, really looks cool. Mike
It's actually cracking down on it very quickly. There's a lot of ongoing litigation and a lot more in the pipeline. (I'm astonished that Clickbank allows that, to be honest - I can't see that continuing for long, given what the FTC are up to at the moment). IMO you need either to remove that "as seen on" or get some legal advice about it immediately. And quite apart from that, it's going to put a lot of people off anyway, because they'll suspect that you're not altogether being honest about it. And that's a pretty dreadful thing for you to have people thinking when you're trying to sell them something, you know?
Is there some kind of eBook out there which promotes spamming forums with fake "hey check out my sales page blahh" because it just seems this place is getting over run with noobs with little posts trying to get their URLs indexed with these annoying posts. from now on we should ignore all requests from people like this with less than 50 posts, as I think these are X-Rumer blasts nothing more.
I find you really don't have a sales copy. There are only testimonials on your sales page. I didn't even find a tidy headline with benefits or bullet points. If you need a sales copywriter to help you with sales copy, feel free to PM me.
my cousin is a attorney and i asked about the "As Seen On" thing. Technically, your product should be listed on the site with a picture or verbiage that says they like your product or recommend it. The way around that is if you have an ad on the site...even a adwords ad, technically that site is allowing you to promote your product. "As Seen" is so general anyway i dont think you would have an legal worries anyway.....you will get a warning at first anway. If you have a adwords ad on google your site is technically seen on Google
It wouldn't actually be primarily the legal worries that would stop me from using it, myself. It would be the knowledge that so many potential customers will feel the site's trying to deceive them. (Do you seriously imagine that people don't see through stuff like that?!). That's the very last thing I want people to feel when I'm trying to sell them something, myself. The only way to prove the point, of course, is to split-test it and see for yourself - as others have done - the higher conversion-rate when you remove it from the page.
All you have to do is replace the as seen on image depicting TV shows your product has never been seen on and replace it with an as seen on Google, Yahoo, MSN, HubPages, Squidoo etc. Then write articles and post them on those article sites and make ads in google, yahoo, and MSN. Then you're not deceiving anyone. You product really has been seen on those sites. There I Fixed It.