IMO it's perfect! Just remove the footer. I think page will look better without it Have you done this landing page by yourself or someone has helped you?
Honestly, i think its good enough to run with, but, in my opinion the design can be tightened up in spots. As an example, the check marks are not aligned properly. Agree that the footer looks a little out of place.
I think the page is pretty good I guess. I think I have already seen this website but it looked different before. A few things I would do If I were you are: Add some more content to the sales pitch. Your page is almost kind of scary...especially the withdrawal video... So I think you should add a happier side to the page that shows relief. Don't just say that your product works and have a bunch of testimonials. After your say that you created a theory that worked. Talk about how good the panic attack victim will feel to get their life back in control and the relief that will be put into their life. The weight lifted off of their shoulders will be amazing.... that sort of thing. I also don't like the big box under "My Experience" This makes it look like a testimonial, as if you were not still talking to them. I think you should keep the text in this section the same as the text above, remove the square, and put the picture centered under the text. The idea of voice testimonials is good. I personally wouldn't put them on the side like that and continue the box all the way down the page like that. Also, the voice testimonials sound a little rehearsed. Towards the bottom of the page, the box with the check marks in it - the checkmarks are too close to the text. Overall I think the sales pitch is too short and too negative. But that's just my opinion.
Ya. Who helped you out and how much did it cost. I am having a heck of time trying to do my own site now....I know how to do it i just dont have the patience and design skills. My pages look very ameturish.
You need to remember who your audience is. Is it someone who isn't sure what a panic attack is? Or is it someone who has them all the time and you found a way to help them? Hopefully, it is the second one. And if it is, I would start out with the BENEFITS. How is your product going to help them. What will they get out of it, etc. These need to go as close to the top as possible. Remember, you have about a whole 10 seconds to convince people that you have something they need. Your customer testimonials look like you wrote them yourself. Not only because of the content, but you included 2 email addresses with very similar format. Complete first name, last name and followed by a number. A very similar number at that.. 526 and 56. If these are valid emails, I hope you got their permission to publically post their email addresses. You normally never want to do that. With regards to the layout of your site, I would get rid of the banner at the bottom. I would also change the layout so that you aren't using that right hand column. You have a ton of wasted space on the right side. After you scroll down just a little, that column is empty. Doesn't look good, at least to me. Hope this helps.. Zeek