Please ===>review<==== my salespage page

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by ludovic115, Dec 15, 2009.

  1. #1
    Hi guys,

    I just have a thing for asking questions all the time regarding a topic. Even, if I were a high authority in a field, I would still ask questions... With the many copywriting talents that differentiate throughout this forum, I would like to know, if anyone can offer suggestions to my salespage.

    It would be mostly appreciated.

    Thanks, and all the best

    Salespage ===> Private Label Rights
     
    ludovic115, Dec 15, 2009 IP
  2. Perry Rose

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    For starters, your site looks like one of those same ol' typical template pages.

    It is also waaaaaay too long.

    Long sales pages without free, GOOD tips and nice pictures do not sell.

    Way too much fluff text.
     
    Perry Rose, Dec 15, 2009 IP