Please Review my salesletter

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by fracekm, Nov 10, 2009.

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    Will you guys review my sales page for me? Thanks stopsweat.info
     
    fracekm, Nov 10, 2009 IP
  2. netdriver788

    netdriver788 Well-Known Member

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    The page is not loading and it gives error message-You tried to access the address http://stopsweat.info/, which is currently unavailable. Check it out..
     
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  3. fracekm

    fracekm Active Member

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    what about now?
     
    fracekm, Nov 16, 2009 IP
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    mhuy2x Peon

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    Oh well the site is a typical sales page but I think it has all the needed information that a customer will need. I am only confused with the cover of your ebook. The girl and the ocean..to me that is not quite related to your product niche. Other than that everything else is fine.
     
    mhuy2x, Nov 16, 2009 IP