Please review my sales page

I am writing an e-book, and the design for the sales page is ready.

I would really appreciate if you could take a look at it and give me your opinion.

Don't look to hard on the copywriting, I have just started and I need more time

Just a few hints about the e-book, just so you could relate the design to the contents of the e-book.

I am writing the story of Internet marketing mistakes and failure. I am adding my opinion of why people fail at Internet marketing, and what kind of mistakes they make. And I am doing interviews with people who have made mistakes, I am adding their stories to the e-book.

Oh, I actually forgot the link to the sales page ... www.marketingflop.com

Thanks
Jens

 

You need a description meta tag... Group all your CSS into a single external file. Otherwise the copy is good! I guess you will add the term and privacy pages eventually?!?

 

Yes, I will be adding more text soon and I will do the meta tags as well.

Thanks!

 

Great idea for an ebook. I was thinking of doing the same thing with the same approach but don't have the time right now.

I like the looks but wonder why your not using 100% CSS.

 

Thanks.

The reason that I am not using 100% css is that my designer did this, and I guess she didn't want to use 100% css

 

You lack of something important - customer reviews and proof.

 

Yes, I will be adding that soon. But my e-book is not finished, so I can't get any reviews before that

 

Visually, it looks very good. You've got enough content to 'draw' visitors in.

 

Thank you!

I have published it, and I am getting signups.. but I need to do some editing, just to get the words right.

 

Design wise it is good