Please review my sales page please :)

Recently wrote these sales pages and would like to know what you think. Which page is best and why? Your suggestions would be really helpful!

Thanks!

The pages for you to look at are:

Normal Page
Page for Clickbank affiliates

 

Hi there enjoy your sales page, I feel you could try to change ebook cover a little to dark, wishing you the best.

 

The text is fine, as for the design... there is no design everything is white, or you are working on it?

 

which page is too white pmcheck?

the second page is copied from another page but the first page I designed from scratch...which page is better?

 

I think that if you changed the white color of the main background it will be more eye catchy, it makes me feel that as if something is missing. But the arrangement and the flow is really excellent.

 

yeh y need to figure out the colour scheme again

 

Thanks, you have captured the reason of buying your products, testimontials, and the benefit of your products. However, you might also want to include why the reader must get your products and not other similar products. You could also include the reason of why they must get your products now and not some other time. A simple p/s statement at the end of your signature may not look enough.

Do PM me if you need any help in term of marketing your website.

Cheers!
Patrick

 

Hi,

Your site flows well. I have 3 suggestions based on my experiences.

1. Do not show 2 price reductions as that leaves a "gimmick" impression.
New Low Price:
$39.95 $29.95 $24.95
2. I would refrain from the use of the word "ebook". People are all too familiar with cheap ebooks and you should differentiate by using terms like "in digital download format" or "book download"
3. If you want to use the "price reduction" offer, use a script that discounts the book if someone leaves your site as a small popup "last offer". I have taken those opportunities myself when mulling over a product. Those scripts work and they salvage an otherwise lost sale.

This was a well written page and I think the white background is just fine.

 

I would say add a little more color (too much white) and maybe some animation.
kevindill had a few good ideas.

 

nice work...

 

I like the first page best.

 

good work man