Please review my sales letter

Discussion in 'General Business' started by yangyang, Apr 25, 2008.

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    http://forums.digitalpoint.com/showthread.php?t=811524

    It's in there, about my serivce to code XHTML. Though it's not generating positive results but I believe it's much better than the last time.

    My main selling point is quality and affordable budget for my clients and I used several different metaphor to say that.

    Sometimes I just think it's really tricky to do marketing, you never know what works until you try it out, even experts? Just the slightest changes make huge differences.

    I guess I'm just a geeky who's doomed to do geeky work for a living...ugh..


    What'd you say?
     
    yangyang, Apr 25, 2008 IP
  2. KarlMiller

    KarlMiller Active Member

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    K geeky,
    Try and continually think like your target clients.
    You enjoy the suspense like most marketers do.
    I think your work is just fine.
    Karl
     
    KarlMiller, Apr 25, 2008 IP
  3. yangyang

    yangyang Banned

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    Thanks Karl for the heads up, but what do you mean by suspense? And the most markerters, I assume it's the majority of markerters who are mediocrity?
     
    yangyang, Apr 25, 2008 IP