Please Review My Sales Letter (website )

Hi guys,
What do you think about this?

http://wealthymembers.com

do you feel that the sales letter is good enough to convert visitors into buyers ??

Also, is the price 499$ reasonable???

I am not selling only an ebook, The buyers will get a website, ebook (report to earn money through affiliates) and domain and hosting..

Should the price be more or less ???

Any short comings in letter itself ???

Please take a look and please review it.

Be frank and honest.

Replies would be greatly appreciated.

Thank you all..

 

Though I am not the sort of guy who would be interested in this. But anyone who have some interest in this ebook might end up buying it. you can have atleast 55 % success with this sales copy.

But there is room for improvement too.

 

Room for improvement ?? Where should i improve?? any other ideas ??

 

I think it is a typical landing page rather than a "sales letter" .

 

I agree, just another typical landing page design, feel like scammer website )

 

i think 100 visitor,5 can convert into buyer.. need to be more information about this website doing.. nice job..

 

what could i do to make it look like a "sales letter" and not a scammer website ??

 

yes, this guy is a scammer...please check his iTraders before you deal with him exposing his breadth