Please Review My Poster Designs

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by ottoisaac, Oct 26, 2007.

  1. #1
    These are some poster designs I've been working on for a state-wide campaign. I was wondering if anyone had any comments or suggestions?

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    ottoisaac, Oct 26, 2007 IP
  2. htmlqueen

    htmlqueen Peon

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    #2
    I think font color should eb more attractive otherwise its ok
     
    htmlqueen, Oct 26, 2007 IP
  3. eruct

    eruct Well-Known Member

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    I don't mind the color of the typeface as much as the actual typefaces.
    Change the 'People' typeface to something sans-serif.
     
    eruct, Oct 26, 2007 IP
  4. ottoisaac

    ottoisaac Well-Known Member

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    Change it so it looks more like the other typeface? I kind of like the two different styles.
     
    ottoisaac, Oct 26, 2007 IP
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    #5
    hi

    ,first poster is very nice ,but i think no of words in second poster is more , try conveying same idea in few words , so that it is more striking.
     
    hariakris, Oct 26, 2007 IP
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    zorah Well-Known Member

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    I like it! nice photography :)
     
    zorah, Oct 26, 2007 IP
  7. RovingCalypso

    RovingCalypso Well-Known Member

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    #7
    The text is a bit hard to read, it looks like one single sentence which it isn't, you may wana change that.
     
    RovingCalypso, Oct 27, 2007 IP
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    eruct Well-Known Member

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    Well if you like it that's cool, I was just giving my 2 cents.
    I will agree with 'RovingCalypso' that you should at least re-organize the white type in the second poster to make each line read better, as they are really like bullet points and not one complete sentence
     
    eruct, Oct 27, 2007 IP
  9. lovedienow

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    Funny Picture :) lolz
     
    lovedienow, Oct 27, 2007 IP
  10. trevomanut

    trevomanut Active Member

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    #10
    I don't think that the posters need editing.
    They are great.
    But that is my opinion. :)
     
    trevomanut, Oct 28, 2007 IP
  11. DesignsbyPam

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    The only thing that doesn't fit is the font used for "People". Just doesn't seem to fit in with the overall look. A cleaner font would work better. IMHO :)

    Otherwise, very nice!
     
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    looks great to me
     
    jkegroup, Oct 28, 2007 IP