These are some poster designs I've been working on for a state-wide campaign. I was wondering if anyone had any comments or suggestions?
I don't mind the color of the typeface as much as the actual typefaces. Change the 'People' typeface to something sans-serif.
hi ,first poster is very nice ,but i think no of words in second poster is more , try conveying same idea in few words , so that it is more striking.
The text is a bit hard to read, it looks like one single sentence which it isn't, you may wana change that.
Well if you like it that's cool, I was just giving my 2 cents. I will agree with 'RovingCalypso' that you should at least re-organize the white type in the second poster to make each line read better, as they are really like bullet points and not one complete sentence
The only thing that doesn't fit is the font used for "People". Just doesn't seem to fit in with the overall look. A cleaner font would work better. IMHO Otherwise, very nice!