Please review my portfolio

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  2. 8everything

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    I like the front page, very nice :)

    The flash site design is pretty nice too. I don't know why but the photograph seems to stand out too much...

    Also, one suggestion: an HTML version of the site would be great for dial up users..
     
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    Very neat and coherent. Spider is nice, you could add some action to spider, when someone clicks on it :).

    I found one small bug: if i move over 'print design' it doesn't make any sound sometimes (but sometimes it clicks like the other ones).
     
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    visualkreations Well-Known Member

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    thanks for noticing the print design button sound thing
     
    visualkreations, Apr 16, 2007 IP
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    Welcome, have a nice stay here!
     
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    Very nice design! Looks sharp. Just one thing: on "about me" page your title is about "me" 1st person, but the copy is about Karim (in 3rd person). I'd change the title to "about Karim", or the entire copy to 1st person version "I am an Algonquin College graduate..."). Other than that your portfolio site is great.

    astra
     
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    Can you in any way suggest your price for work ?
     
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    #8
    It may be a good idea to place more text on your pages, for
    both the people with flash plugin disabled and the search engines.
     
    Artisan, Apr 16, 2007 IP
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    #9
    I like your design, its nice and clean. Here are some ideas...

    1. The very first intro page and "Enter Site" may not be needed. I would go right into your web page.

    2. On your "About me" page, the second paragraph has the word "learnt" - does not sound right.

    3. The person sitting on the right doesn't seem to fit in to me. I think someone mentioned this in a earlier reply too. Also, there is not alot of detail on the picture, looks almost like to colors were reduced too much.

    4. May want to add some color and inscrease the thumbnail size.
     
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    #10
    Very good. Sharp!!
    keep it up budy! :D
     
    SGMan, Apr 17, 2007 IP
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    nice job.. specially using flash.

    Im not very good with flash always been wanting to learn it more. im more a php, mysql, html, java and some others type of guy.
     
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    Very nice. Awsome flash design used there, nice one!
     
    Liberation, Apr 17, 2007 IP
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    Congrats, great site, love the use of flash and 3d.
     
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    I like the color combinations. Simple yet elegant. I just find it a bit slow loading in my pc... Great Work!
     
    fej, Apr 17, 2007 IP