Please review my point of sale systems site.

Discussion in 'Websites' started by poslogistics, Jun 7, 2006.

  1. #1
    Hi,

    if anyone can review my site and give me positive feedback on it i'd much appreciate it.

    www.poslogistics.co.uk

    thanks
     
    poslogistics, Jun 7, 2006 IP
  2. Caios

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    #2
    Im a newbie so dont know and awful lot but I can only find the word "point of sale" once on your page and in the middle. Wouldnt the words "point of sale" be target keywords for you? or "point of sale software"?
     
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  3. poslogistics

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    hi thanks for the response, the site can be found using POS Software, EPOS Software, electronic point of sale etc so there's a mix through out the site.
     
    poslogistics, Jun 7, 2006 IP
  4. 220volt

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    Looks pretty good to me.
    Only one suggestion. I would work a little bit on the logo. Something to identifies the company and maybe a slogan.
     
    220volt, Jun 8, 2006 IP
  5. angelfire

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    #5
    Nice site.
    I agree with 220volt make logo that well describes your company.
    Good luck ("",)
     
    angelfire, Jun 8, 2006 IP
  6. poslogistics

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    thanks, its taken me a while to get it to the point its at now. I'm a relative newbie to design and seo so i'm pleased with the results 1+2nd place globally on yahoo for epos software our main search term, top 5 on msn and top 500 on google! :D

    I'll think of a slogan.

    thanks again.
     
    poslogistics, Jun 8, 2006 IP
  7. suprastan

    suprastan Well-Known Member

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    Nice job.. Well done
     
    suprastan, Jun 9, 2006 IP
  8. Terabyte

    Terabyte Well-Known Member

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    The first thing I see comming in on the site is that I can't distinguish the menu from the header from the information. Maybe a redesign that s more clear would be good. I have a little hard to see the manu that is placed on the header - the vertical one. But maybe that's me.
     
    Terabyte, Jun 12, 2006 IP
  9. poslogistics

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    Yeah, I think I know what you mean. I was trying to make it look different, but it doesn't quite work. I'm trying to use text links only to help the SE's. I i'll probably change it to have the sub menus appear beneath the main menu.
     
    poslogistics, Jun 13, 2006 IP
  10. poslogistics

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    I think this is how I'm going to do the menus. It allows a better break between the title and the content.

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    Anyone agree?
     
    poslogistics, Jun 23, 2006 IP
  11. randomlande

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    thats a major improvment, try making it a gif or high quality jpg. the logo should also be a bigger part of the header
     
    randomlande, Jun 23, 2006 IP
  12. poslogistics

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    Thanks, will do.
     
    poslogistics, Jun 23, 2006 IP
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    poslogistics, Jun 30, 2006 IP