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Please Review My Personal Website | Own Coded

Discussion in 'Websites' started by AshPaulzzz, Oct 15, 2013.

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    Hi Dp Members,

    Will Anyone Please Review My Site and Tell me How to Improve Its looks ;)

    Its HTML,Css & Jquery Based !

    Check http://donwapi.in/myworld/

    Thanks in Advanced ;) :p
     
    AshPaulzzz, Oct 15, 2013 IP
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    Very nice website! I didn't like much the colors, Change them to something more clean and professional.
    Changing the font would be nice too.
    GL!
     
    theunreal, Oct 15, 2013 IP
  3. AshPaulzzz

    AshPaulzzz Greenhorn

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    thanks for your valuable time for review , i will work on css but now with the fonts looks good in the design but i will change it soon :)

    sorry fr my bad english also hehe :p
     
    AshPaulzzz, Oct 15, 2013 IP
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    I don't like the wait to get into your site. Yes, it's nice and fancy, looks cool, but it's not good for a website.

    Is all that jQuery stuff really needed? Or instead just present all the relevant information on individual pages?

    Make it responsive (search Google/Bing/whatever for responsive design tutorials), mate. That would be a good start. After you have done that ask for more feedback.
     
    ryan_uk, Oct 15, 2013 IP
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    averyz Well-Known Member

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    Nice graphics, but I didn't even know to click the button until I looked at code view.

    I don't think the "enter" on the index page is a good idea, most views will probably click "close". Why have a obstacle/enter page ?
     
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    It's an awful idea from the 90s and shouldn't be done any more.
     
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    I don't like the wait to get into your site. Yes, it's nice and fancy, looks cool, but it's not good for a website.
    Is all that jQuery stuff really needed? Or instead just present all the relevant information on individual pages?

    Make it responsive (search Google/Bing/whatever for responsive design tutorials), mate. That would be a good start. After you have done that ask for more feedback.

    agree with you bro, but this kind of thing usually many designers using it, i wanna make unique and stylish just for learning and fun, even this kind of sites only access able in javascript enabled browsers :)


    Nice graphics, but I didn't even know to click the button until I looked at code view.
    I don't think the "enter" on the index page is a good idea, most views will probably click "close". Why have a obstacle/enter page ?

    bro as ryan_uk said, it's very old stuffs, i have added the flash option instead of "Enter" to make it more cool

    anyways thank you guys for all infos, i will work on it, i m sure you guys will say its good ;)
     
    AshPaulzzz, Oct 15, 2013 IP