Please review my personal logo.

Discussion in 'Design' started by thilanka-w, Apr 24, 2016.

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Does this logo have a good figure/ground relationship?

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  2. Yes. But it can be improved further.

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  1. #1
    Hi, I'm a graphic design student. I designed this as a personal logo. Can you review it? How is the figure/ground relationship? Is there a way to make improvements?
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    Thank you in advance.
     
    Last edited: Apr 24, 2016
    thilanka-w, Apr 24, 2016 IP
  2. Ditmar

    Ditmar Well-Known Member

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    #2
    Try to design another personal logo for yourself.
     
    Ditmar, Apr 24, 2016 IP
  3. thilanka-w

    thilanka-w Greenhorn

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    #3
    Hi, I have designed more, and that is the one I liked best.

    This is another. 222.jpg
     
    thilanka-w, Apr 24, 2016 IP
  4. Ditmar

    Ditmar Well-Known Member

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    You live in Sri Lanka?
     
    Ditmar, Apr 24, 2016 IP
  5. thilanka-w

    thilanka-w Greenhorn

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    Yeah.
     
    thilanka-w, Apr 24, 2016 IP
  6. Mexican ™

    Mexican ™ Greenhorn

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    Weird, weird, weird .. Sorry. :(
     
    Mexican ™, Apr 24, 2016 IP
  7. thilanka-w

    thilanka-w Greenhorn

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    :confused: What do you mean?
     
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  8. JudySlean

    JudySlean Greenhorn

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    #8
    Hello, to be honest, it is very blurry, and don’t understand! Try to use, more bright colors, other writing style, and something more "costly"! Personal logo, it is a first impression of your professionalism! That is , why spend more time on this task! Also, use PhotoShop!
     
    JudySlean, Apr 24, 2016 IP
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    drowningmonkey Banned

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    Not a very good logo. I def agree with Judy, this will be your first impression and it leaves much to be desired. I would recommend a cleaner design and add some text underneath it to let people know what you do. Either way, best of luck.
     
    drowningmonkey, Apr 25, 2016 IP
  10. 24Hours

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    So far your "brand" is dark, hard-to-read text. Now I'm not knocking dark and hard to read, because that describes my damn wife, but for a logo ... I think you should give this some more thought.
     
    24Hours, Apr 25, 2016 IP
  11. thilanka-w

    thilanka-w Greenhorn

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    OK guys, thanks for the help... I'm still new to this and trying to figure it out.. Your advice is much appreciated.
     
    thilanka-w, Apr 25, 2016 IP