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Discussion in 'Websites' started by Dana Tintor, Jan 26, 2017.

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    Hi there.
    I would be very grateful if you could look at my blog and tell me what you think about it.
    It is a personal blog, and my goal is simply to learn from it so I can create something more professional later on (the topics are not relevant at this point).
    But I am not a native English speaker so I would like to know how does my writing sound.
    And besides that, is it readable and pleasing to the eye in this format?

    Thank you!

    http://shakeupsofa.com/life-is-a-mindset/magic-behind-successful-people/
     
    Dana Tintor, Jan 26, 2017 IP
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    JoeSpirit Well-Known Member

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    Dana, I read a few of your articles, and I enjoyed the insights. Although I did notice a couple times that English is not your first language your writing is easy to understand. You have a good command of English.

    In case you aren't aware, Jim Carrey wrote himself a check for 1-million dollars before he became a star. He dated that check for 10 years in the future, and on that date he cashed the check. No, I don't believe he was overly concerned with politicians.

    You share some great thoughts, and I think you have a good blog going there.

    I think you should keep at it. Keep your writing natural, develop your personal voice, and you'll do fine.
     
    JoeSpirit, Jan 31, 2017 IP
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    Dana Tintor Peon

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    So thankful for your comments and the fact that you like my blog, it means a lot to me. :)
    I believe that my English skills will be much better with time, but I'm glad that for now it's easy to understand. The rest will come with practice. :)
    Thank you one more time for a review, I appreciate it!
     
    Dana Tintor, Jan 31, 2017 IP