Please review my pamphlet

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    Please review my website's one page pamphlet
    pamphlet.jpg
     
    hallianonline, Jan 25, 2012 IP
  2. Irfi0009

    Irfi0009 Banned

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    #2
    oh its look nice but i think it could more dashing .............
     
    Irfi0009, Jan 26, 2012 IP
  3. nicelife

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    #3
    Yeah, it looks nice... but I think the contact info is too small

    Remember, the objective here is to SELL, FAST. Phone and URL must be very accessible, instantly.

    You need to be more impressive, highlight your own keywords in the paragraph.
     
    nicelife, Jan 26, 2012 IP
  4. alka007

    alka007 Active Member

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    #4
    Really this is looks perfect. But I am thinking it will be better if you put some graphics in herder section...
     
    alka007, Jan 26, 2012 IP
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    #5
    Just making the changes in the font style of SHOW CASE will have a professional look.
     
    gunnamanil, Jan 28, 2012 IP
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    qamarrehman Peon

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    #6
    Nice work but i think do more
     
    qamarrehman, Jan 28, 2012 IP
  7. afrog

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    #7
    Good job. Looks perfect.
     
    afrog, Jan 28, 2012 IP
  8. hallianonline

    hallianonline Active Member

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    Yes its orignal size is A4 but I have reduced its size to post here thats why the contact info is looking too small
     
    hallianonline, Jan 29, 2012 IP
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    sya Well-Known Member

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    #9
    nice looking... but more image can make hard open site.. so you must put on great hosting :)
     
    sya, Jan 29, 2012 IP
  10. joomdev

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    #10
    good job but the highlight on special discount should be more eye catching
     
    joomdev, Feb 3, 2012 IP
  11. zubizubi

    zubizubi Active Member

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    #11
    Nice. Looking great dude!
     
    zubizubi, Feb 3, 2012 IP
  12. joomdev

    joomdev Member

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    #12
    welcome :)///
     
    joomdev, Feb 3, 2012 IP
  13. Install

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    #13
    Nice, nice. I like it
     
    Install, Feb 3, 2012 IP
  14. bluebenz

    bluebenz Well-Known Member

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    Hi hallianonline,
    I think there's one unconsistent.
    you use a not formal font for the header while the content use formal font.

    the rest? look good and professional.
    keep your good work :)
     
    bluebenz, Feb 3, 2012 IP
  15. hallianonline

    hallianonline Active Member

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    Yes I also want to change its header but the showcase is a simple logo of the package
     
    hallianonline, Feb 3, 2012 IP
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    #16
    Looking great, just add more info..
     
    Buxom_Bold, Feb 4, 2012 IP