Please review my page.

Please review my page.Do you think it will work, will anyone use my service ? If there is anything you would recommend, please do, I'm trying to develop it.And how is the domain name, is it nice.Thanks.

The site is in my sig..

 

Look's good, just need a native enlglish speaker to go over the copy. Good luck!

 

Plz don't understand me wrong, when I see such a web de I quickly hit Back button. Try to google for free templates, if you have difficulte to make one.

http://www.google.si/search?hl=sl&q=free+css+templates&meta=

 

To start I think the font size is too big. You need to break up the text, try using a template as suggested by the previous poster.

 

You seriosly need a good template to keep your visitors hooked.....
Good Luck!

 

I agree with the previous posters your template does not look professional, you should try to
get a professional template and the text in the body of the page is too big it should be smaller,
good luck with the site.

 

Font size is too large, and the logo, in my opinion, is way off from any theme and color/design.

 

Add a simple but attractive logo
decrease the fone size
besides putting affiliate images at the lower portion of da site; try to add a left side navigation bar. it will give it a more professional look.
add a contact us tab to add your email address, ect.
dont rely on font to highligh the stuff, do categorize the items or so.
hope it helps

 

Use a better design. Try a good template.

 

Too much text for my liking, maybe better to chop it down under headlines...