Please review my new website

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  1. #1
    Please review and rate my new website (arrangement,domain name, SEO and etc). Feel something wrong but dont exactly know where to improve. Kindly request help on this website.

    My website: http://www.mesotheliomawiki.org/
     
    lifeplayer, Dec 17, 2008 IP
  2. mr4army

    mr4army Banned

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    couple of things that put me off text is a little bit to small add some colour to the page its a bit blank with the white background

    good luck
     
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  3. kingofsanda

    kingofsanda Peon

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    That theme does not look good for a mesothelioma site. You should get a more
    unique theme and you should make the font a little bigger.
     
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  4. sarirejo

    sarirejo Well-Known Member

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    #4
    more content add picture
    add favicon.
     
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  5. justinlorder

    justinlorder Peon

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    #5
    It is quite plain and little content .
    Even if the middle DIV is higher than left and right DIVs, you should spread the middle DIV borderline to bottom .
     
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    crivion Notable Member

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    Sorry dude but I think its a made for adsense website, but anyway if you agree with me, nice work good ad placement
     
    crivion, Dec 18, 2008 IP
  7. netdriver788

    netdriver788 Well-Known Member

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    Looks cool but i suggest you to update a good template and resize the font for the text.Thanks.
     
    netdriver788, Dec 20, 2008 IP
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    #8
    Make the font bigger to make it easier to read and the title name should stand out more so I would double the font. When I was reading I felt sort of trapped. I would put just a little more color in the sight and TAKE OUT some of the information. It is very informative though not quite as fun to read, and some people may get confused by a number of the words in there.
     
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  9. lifeplayer

    lifeplayer Notable Member

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    Thanks for the input, already make some changing.
    Besides that, i'm busy on writing the content now, and i will upload it next week at least 50 of them
    My friend promise to make a banner for me as well.
    Wish this can be done end of next week
     
    lifeplayer, Dec 21, 2008 IP
  10. Janck

    Janck Active Member

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    The design is boring, but it will probablly rank well in search engines, because there is a lot of text.
     
    Janck, Dec 21, 2008 IP
  11. lifeplayer

    lifeplayer Notable Member

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    This wesite is still new, now only 10 article, but this week target is add up to 50. The final target is more than 300 article within 4 months
     
    lifeplayer, Dec 22, 2008 IP
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    #12
    Honest opinion right here:

    It makes me want to leave.

    Spice it up a bit.
     
    phpkid00, Dec 22, 2008 IP
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    #13
    Serif fonts such as Times Roman can be very difficult to read on a monitor, especially when the size of the font is so small. If you want to keep the font size the way it is, I suggest that you use a Sans Serif font, such as Arial because it will be easier to read. Also, keep in mind that most web sites tend to use a much shorter line length than what you have. As a result, you have many more words on a line than viewers may normally expect and THAT fact may tend to overwhelm them somewhat. Remember, in web graphic design, it's probably safest to think in terms of the lowest common denominator viewer.
    Good luck!
     
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    You can improve it. More article.Niche article would be better.Good luck with your journey.
     
    xeon2neon, Dec 22, 2008 IP
  15. lifeplayer

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    Thanks for the input. I will improve on it
     
    lifeplayer, Dec 25, 2008 IP
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    Change the font and add more pictures.
     
    intentionguide, Dec 25, 2008 IP
  17. lifeplayer

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    looking for some picture.....any idea where can i get the picture????
     
    lifeplayer, Dec 26, 2008 IP
  18. mrhrk01

    mrhrk01 Well-Known Member

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    #18
    I would suggest:
    1) Add fav icon
    2) Add site map
    3) Create a logo and a more appealing header
    4) Add more content
    5) Add more pics
    6) Add some structure/organisation to your site
    7) Use a different colour scheme
    8) Use php instead of html(if you want to use html then i recommed using short names for the html file names)

    If you need any advice just PM me.

    Best of luck with the site!

    Kind Regards
     
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  19. lifeplayer

    lifeplayer Notable Member

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    Thanks mrhrk01 , rep added
    Uploading more content now.....just complete 20 new article
     
    lifeplayer, Jan 2, 2009 IP
  20. mrhrk01

    mrhrk01 Well-Known Member

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    #20
    No worries, if you need me to review it again, just PM me

    Kind Regards
     
    mrhrk01, Jan 2, 2009 IP