please review my new website and comment

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by Dilthu, Dec 20, 2008.

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    I created a wordpress blog and phpbb forum recently and please review my new website and comment

    Wordpress blog
    Forum
     
    Dilthu, Dec 20, 2008 IP
  2. ~kev~

    ~kev~ Well-Known Member

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    Shouldn't the "Forum" link in the navigation bar at the top of the home page actually go to the forum? Instead it goes to a page that talks about forums.

    Change the "Posted by admin" in your articles. It looks unprofessional for your post are made by "Admin". Wordpress allows you to create a second name for your users. Do that instead of using "Admin".

    I like the colors, but black is not a "professional" color. For a commercial grade site us bright colors such as white, an off white, blues or reds.

    The meta description needs more keywords - <meta name="description" content="Ways You Can Earn Online" />
    Searches for any of those words will give you millions of results. There has to be a way of tagerting your nitch market and standing out at the same time. A google search for "Ways You Can Earn Online" came back with 10,500,000 results. That needs to be brought down to less then 1 million for a new site. In other words, your meta description is targeting too big of a market for a new site.

    Linking to your site with the keywords "Wordpress blog" like in your first post tells google that your site is about a wordpress blog, not making money online.
     
    ~kev~, Dec 20, 2008 IP
  3. ShadowMatic

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    I like the color scheme and I like the general setup. However the Forum tab should really bring the person to the forum. Also a few less ads and a little more information would be helpful. I personally do not like ads in the writing. Just a hint, I would make sure everyone can tell what the site is about, make sure everyone knows that it will help them make money and HOW it will help them
     
    ShadowMatic, Dec 20, 2008 IP
  4. kingofsanda

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    I agree with what has been said thus far but as far as the design of the forum... It
    looks very generic you should customize it by changing up the color scheme and
    adding a logo to the page.
     
    kingofsanda, Dec 20, 2008 IP
  5. Dilthu

    Dilthu Peon

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    I change template. now is it ok
     
    Dilthu, Dec 21, 2008 IP
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    Make a header. That one is simple, but maby too simple
     
    Fragshare, Dec 21, 2008 IP
  7. mrhrk01

    mrhrk01 Well-Known Member

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    The site looks good, nice idea, nice layout, good use of colours as well, and easy to navigate.

    The fourm looks good as well.

    One thing i would say you may want to create a logo and place that logo on the forum and on the site as well.

    Good Luck with the site!

    Kind Regards
     
    mrhrk01, Dec 29, 2008 IP