Please Review My New Webmaster Blog

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by Mr.Mafia, Jun 14, 2009.

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    Mr.Mafia, Jun 14, 2009 IP
  2. Mr.Mafia

    Mr.Mafia Peon

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    #2
    I need your suggestion mates ..
     
    Mr.Mafia, Jun 14, 2009 IP
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    #3
    Alright bud, I'll take a stab at it...

    Here is my first impression and thoughts...

    Buy a URL for that domain right off the bat. Blogspot is okay initially but you show professionalism if you buy a unique URL.

    Also, when I first come onto the blog your header throws me...

    You hit me with an advertisement right off the bat and it could also use a face lift or sorts, perhaps a new font with shadow and bubbled and less wording underneath.

    Below the header I see dead space until I look closer and then I notice that there are what appears to be keywords or something, I have no idea what you want me to do with all of that but it seems like to me that you are trying to fool Google or something and makes you look unprofessional.

    Since you are targeting people wanting to make money on the net try giving them some good content before you hit them with advertisements all over the place. Heck if I am searching for info about how to make money on the net I don't want to immediately spend money on your site, I'm there to get educated and then later on, when I have warmed up to you I would probably not have a problem with buying something you recommend, not something you throw down my throat immediately upon arrival.

    The first piece of content is on a gaming portal...

    Where's the beef?

    I thought you were going to teach me about how to make money on the Internet, not some cool game or something like that...

    Stay consistent with one theme and guide your potential customers down a path into a sale once you have built a solid relationship with them...

    These are my suggestions...

    Thanks,

    Jeremie
     
    hopesquest, Jun 14, 2009 IP
  4. soul_of_god

    soul_of_god Well-Known Member

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    #4
    this is a nulled script site i guess :p
     
    soul_of_god, Jun 14, 2009 IP
  5. Mr.Mafia

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    Thanks dude for your suggestion. Any more?
     
    Mr.Mafia, Jun 15, 2009 IP
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    #6
    nice suggestion...for more info www.ajsquare.com
     
    agree6, Jun 15, 2009 IP
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    #7
    nice site, simple and very common template you have
     
    susmita, Jun 15, 2009 IP
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    2advance Well-Known Member

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    The posts looks good and gives lot of useful information, I like it. Just make them into justify style..
     
    2advance, Jun 15, 2009 IP
  9. Mr.Mafia

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    Thanks Gyz for review.

    any more suggestions ?
     
    Mr.Mafia, Jun 16, 2009 IP