Please review my new WA site

Hi Everyone,

I spent 7 hours making this site... I nearly had a nervous breakdown doing it, I really have no patience :L

Please check it out and give me a critical review on it and how I can improve on it...

I want to get into google for the keyword "wealthy affiliate review" so I hope I have everything in order with it...

Thanks in advance,

Fergal

my site address is : http://www.wealthyaffiliate-reviewer.com

 

I don't like that you quote a salary of $360,000 in the first year, and that if you follow the program you will be quitting your job in months.
I belong to WA and I have never heard them make those claims, if they did, I would have never joined.
The email you use looks like one a spammer would use. If you own the domain, why use a free hotmail address ? Doesn't look like a person that is making 360k a year.

Also, are you sure that you show the back end members area in your sales page? (the video)

It looks like a basic sales page, but your language (the words) makes it seem shady.

JMO

 

I don't like the text in header 'Wealthy Affiliate Review', change its font

 

Hi, Thanks for the review and the comments, I will work to making my site better...

it says $360,000 in your first year on the wa.com homepage... isn't realistic but thats what kyle and carson claim
...

thanks again

 

make your visitor convinced.
that is short sales later, too short description.

 

My English is not good so I can't go through the contents on your pages and give comments on that.
The design is not bad, but I suggest you to use free templates, you can download them from free template sites, they still look nicer, cleaner than your current design.
People don't stay long checking your site. To make them stay on your site longer, you need to put important words on the page only, short descriptions but meaningful, small images to make them load quick.

 

something missing in your site. It like at satellite...

 

nice site

i wonder free web hosting you offer...hmm...

 

what would you reccommend? just change the font?

I'm going to spend a few hours at it tomorrow and mix it up a bit

 

I would have to agree with some of the other members. If you are trying to show a professional front to your visitors, saying you make 300K+ a year wont cut it. As everything else on your website argues the contrary to that claim...

 

Its too simple site but fast opened on my mozilla. good work.

 

Your site cool color and simple.

 

Hey everyone...

Thanks for reviewing my site... I have now updated it and I think it looks a lot better I think...

If you get the chance have a nosey at it again and let me know if there is any thing left to inprove on it...

Thanks again,

Fergal