Please review my new site

Discussion in 'Websites' started by Dave82689, Jul 24, 2008.

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    http://TheGatorChomp.com I just recently made this site, and spent quite some time on it, so tell me what you guys think about it.

    Thanks
    David
     
    Dave82689, Jul 24, 2008 IP
  2. Ponynugget

    Ponynugget Peon

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    Hi Dave,

    Nice little site you've got here! If you want to increase the readability of the posts, try adding images within them. You'll be amazed at what adding an image or two can do to increase your readership and keep people coming back to your site.

    Also, if you want to make more money, try adding one square AdSense unit within posts (so that the text wraps around it).

    All the best,
    Liam
     
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  3. kingofsanda

    kingofsanda Peon

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    The site is not bad I do not like the placement of the "The Gator Chomp - True Fanatics" banner ad
    I think it may look better in the footer of the site.
     
    kingofsanda, Jul 24, 2008 IP
  4. Dave82689

    Dave82689 Active Member

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    its not a ad its the header of my site lol :p and thanks liam for the review :)
     
    Dave82689, Jul 24, 2008 IP
  5. debach

    debach Banned

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    i saw footer is not centered.
    think layout will be more nice if your footer on center.
    just my opinion.
     
    debach, Jul 24, 2008 IP
  6. Time-AOW

    Time-AOW Peon

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    #6
    You might want to grammar check everything. Your header has "your" when it should be "you're".
    The first story about rape, not a keeper. But again the grammar is incorrect. Should be:
    Former Gator basketball player Teddy Dupay was brought up on charges of allegedly raping, and kidnapping a woman he was in a relationship with for two years. The woman came forward to the police about two weeks ago telling them he allegedly took her from a Utah ski resort beat her, and then afterwards had his way with the woman. The authorities report that the woman who said she was raped had bruises around her arms, scratches, and fractured ribs from the incident. Dupay is going to need a good criminal defense lawyer to get out of this reported, open and shut case.
     
    Time-AOW, Jul 25, 2008 IP
  7. Dave82689

    Dave82689 Active Member

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    the your in the header is exactly how i wanted it i do not want it to sound like you are like you're referes to, and second i ran that post through spell and grammer, check as i do for all of them before i post and its right, i guess your wrong? :p
     
    Dave82689, Jul 25, 2008 IP
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    #8
    easy to overlook and easy to understand!
    perfect!
     
    kleveros, Jul 25, 2008 IP
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    nice site does the trick
     
    tom@totalodds, Jul 27, 2008 IP
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    catchy domain name aswell :)
     
    ::Aaron123::, Jul 27, 2008 IP