Please review my new site

I am temporarily hosting it on geocities. hehe.
Please let me have some feedback.
www.geocities.com/googletrafficsecrets

 

marketexpert,

The way you've laid out the site is pretty good so far, however, I would improve upon the sales copy by adding testimonials, screen shots, what your product has to offer in bullet points..

Good start so far but needs to be a bit more convincing.

Cheers,

Joe

 

Its good but a logo must be there.

 

I would remove the side ad. If you're selling a product, no use in advertising a couple of others.

 

Thanks I agree that The sales motivation is lacking as I have not provided any details.

P.S. Testimonials are already on the site. If you missed them than perhaps the visitors will too. hmmmm

 

Please continue to comment on my site.

 

I agree. No need for the side ads. A logo will make it look better. Good luck!

 

Good site for start. Test it in different browsers, and go as soon as possible for a domain. I started also with Geocities, but for a very short time.

 

There are many sites selling ebooks.. check them out.. they will show you how t properly entice ur audience

 

Nice site man, go for a domain....you can do it! starting at $1.99 for a domain, you can put it on a free hosting account.

 

Yes, you have a site...
know got a domain at godaddy, get a host account and make your own site!

 

good article, i don't link side ads.

 

hello I am missing a banner...something small would by fine on this websiste...Not only text...But I think you make it after you will be not on geocities...enti

 

good information and clear text (easy to read) good luck

 

Nice theme. But don't go for freee hosting... Just buy a domain and host it in any free hosting available in this forum to get good number of visitor...