please review my new site

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by nickspain, Dec 7, 2009.

  1. #1
    its new as from today.click this link
    www.webdedicatedservers.info

    would you click on the buttons if you wgere looking for hosting or servers,

    I know most off us allready have this sorted out so you need to look at it from the point of a newcomer to building websites.
    well i think so.

    tell me what you think !!!!
    regards Nick

    www.webdedicatedservers.info
     
    nickspain, Dec 7, 2009 IP
  2. webria

    webria Peon

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    Website is simple. But content and links seems to be jumbled...

    Kindly look into that.
     
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  3. jyzackoh

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    There is a grammar mistake (perfectionist at work). "So your looking for information on the best dedicated servers at the best prices, Well we have searched the web and found the best so look no further Check these out." as quoted from the site. It should be "you're" instead of "your". Small prob though.

    I think an improvement could be to use another font. Times New Roman kinda looks very cluttered up. Not very pleasing to the reader's eye. Font is also very small. A good way is to remove like 1 or 2 hosts and keep the best ones. Enlarge the font a little too I would suggest.

    Maybe other pros would have other opinions but that's just my 2 cents!

    Zack
     
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  4. nickspain

    nickspain Guest

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    yes it is a bit jumbled, but i did not just want a list of things ( side by side ) as it where, as i want people to read the info and hopefully click for more info.

    would you say its best just to have comparisons


    Nick
     
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  5. nickspain

    nickspain Guest

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    i took you're coments on board and made the changes , I also think it was a bit busy.
    realy thank you so much ..


    Nick
     
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  6. vilambara

    vilambara Active Member

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    This is just my 2 cents. Your site is neat and good, but you need to drive more traffic to make money from this website as Hosting niche becomes very competitive today.
     
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    #7
    You call it website? Your website is very simple.
     
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  8. vilambara

    vilambara Active Member

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    He may designed by himself.
     
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  9. nickspain

    nickspain Guest

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    its ment to be simple man thats the point of it..

    as for traffic i only built this today , er so it wont have any traffic yet.

    i have many other sites that are more complex , but this kind of site needs to get attention from the first second , not have people confused by making it to busy

    Nick
     
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  10. river

    river Active Member

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    I would work on the header. Also 27/7 should be 24/7
     
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  11. nickspain

    nickspain Guest

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    nice one i did not see that
     
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  12. nickspain

    nickspain Guest

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    Last edited: Dec 8, 2009
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    pontifixx Member

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    #13
    Why is the logo blurry?
     
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  14. nickspain

    nickspain Guest

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    you dont like that ??

    its something I can change but i was thinking its ok, let me know what you think..

    Nick
     
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    #15
    the main image is not cool
     
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    br3adman Active Member

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    A new banner would be nice.
     
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    Pretty good. I agree a new banner would be good.
     
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    #18
    IMHO colors are to simple i would thingers of one colour (or two) instead.
     
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  20. SearchLikeMe

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    #20
    Based on this compared to other sites I would get when doing a google search on hosting, I probably would not click on yours. I wish I could quantify it better for you, but it has the look of being homespun and therefore possibly not reliable.
     
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