Well I just got my site up and running for my new eBook on affiliate marketing. The book has indebt information on how to make money through affiliate networks and different kinds of advertisement. I would love to here everyone’s opinion on the site! What needs to be changed/added? Is there anything that would detour you from purchasing if you visited the site? What do you like about it/ etc.. Thanks in advance!
I'd say change the background its ugly But to be honest, It looks like a Bunch of BS and you're just trying to get our $24 just like everyone else on here trying to make money off of there website. Regards, Alex
This site has a simple look and has no structure at all! Website doesn't look professional and has no logo! Background colors are selected incorrectly! It is not a website at all it is just a simple webpage!
This is not a website. This is a blatant con attempt like the thousands of others that look exactly the same as this one. If you're going to scam people, you might as well do it more elegantly. But then it's only the uncouth and imaginative who come up with crap like this, so what can you do?
lolz calm down mate it's just a simple sales page. Im hardly a fan of these types of sites either and when I mistakenly stumble upon them I back out straightaway. Your background does suck though Just to give you an idea of a good example of these types of sites though: www.youreapoorloser.com I have nothing to do with the site but I think it's just an interesting parody on what is essentially the souless bottom-feeders of the internet
Well, I dunno where the graphics originally came from (maybe they're some common theme you can buy) but I recognize them immediately from dayjobkiller.com - and frankly I love that look (looks awful? who are these people? McNeeney did quite well with that theme - if you have the rights to use the graphics, by god, use them). There are other comments you may want to disregard ("looks like you're just trying to earn another $24 dollars" and "looks like you're a big con" guys) - some people have no IM knowledge, don't trust online sales pages, etc. Now to the sales letter, which is really the heart of what will/won't work. The headline is a bit clunky. "the quickest ways I make" doesn't sound right, "I bet you want to get started minutes from now, right?" also sounds a bit like outsourced english writing - how about "I bet you'd want to start immediately, right?" Not to be overly picky - many of the big-name IM guys have some typos and oddities in their sales letters, and I think it actually helps to lower readers' shields in some cases. But the headline's not the place for that. Now the "Who am I to say this?" paragraph you may want to rewrite, it just doesn't flow and kind of broke my interest for a moment. The next couple of paragraphs got it back, but then I was lost again. You definitely want to tighten up, rewrite, proofread, rewrite, tighten up and rewrite your sales letter. Put it through the ringer. Make a copy, rewrite every part of it, then combine the best of the two. Case in point, the very first checkmark text says: I have purchased a "make money" product that has lost you more money then it made. This one sentence shifts tense (I purchased a product that has lost you money - awful grammar). Now back to the good. Your break-up of graphics/text is good. The sales letter is not overly long, just right for a $24.99 product. The points you make and the flow throughout the letter are good. The grammar/English needs a bit of work though. Also, the more I see the other graphics on the page, the more I'm becoming convinced that you may have "borrowed" those graphics w/o permission or having bought them - I see the dayjobkiller blood splatters all over the place. You don't want to do that if that's the case - dayjobkiller is a very well-recognized sales page. Good luck - you're at least 80% of the way there. If you need new graphics, you can attempt to design or find a SIMILAR set of sales page graphics that will work for you. You can always pay someone to help you with the writing. If you can get things smoothed out, you may have a profitable page there!
Thanks for all the great advice! I probably shouldn’t have put a landing page on the review "websites" without explaining what it was first.
Hmmm, I don't particularily mind the layout but, as for the background, sorry, I don't care for that at all (well, maybe on my bedroom wall or something, lol). I don't want to sound harsh but, in all fairness, if I were to accidentally stumble upon this page I really can't say there is anything there that would keep my interest long enough to actually even read it (far from what you want from a viewer, I'm sure). To be honest with you, the first thing that came to my mind when I seen the page was..."ya right, likely a scam." However, I'm NOT saying that it is a scam, I'm just saying that that was the first "impression" I got from seeing the page. Unfortunately, I can't quite put my finger on what it is exactly that even gave me that impression to begin with so I apologize for not being much help to you there. My guess would be that it's because I've seen so many other (comparable) type of sites that did turn out to be nothing but a waste of my time (and, sometimes, my money) that, when I see sites like this, I automatically get that "this is a bunch of BS" kind of a feeling. All the same, if your site "really" does offer what it says it does and it is legit...I wish you all the best. ETA: Oops, totally forgot to point something out. From what I can tell, your e-book is called 'Net Affiliate Strategy' yet, in your header, it says 'Net Affiliate Stratey' (with no 'g' in Strategy). I can't say for sure but I'm guessing that was an unintentional typo so you may just want to fix that up. I know, a small discrepancy to some but, being in the header...yikes! LOL
as mentioned you have to get rid of that muddy background also I don't understand the drops of blood in your graphics? like you are selling your soul or something to get this info.
Ok well I did a lot of cleaning up with the text...hopefully and I changed most of the design. I am still trying to figure out what will work for images inside the text. Old: http://www.netaffiliatestrategy.com/index_old.html New: http://www.netaffiliatestrategy.com/ Do you think this design is better? What should be changed? etc? Again many thanks for all the comments
In my honest opinion I think you need to go back to the drawing board regarding your graphics. The Day Job Killer style ones will be spotted straight away because a lot of people in the IM world are familiar with that site. The other graphics with the wooden yellowy type background just don't match. Pity really because I like your sales page and copy. Also I think people are being a bit hard on these types of sales pages - not all products offered in this way are scams, it's just that these types of sales pages have become affiliated (no pun intended) with scams because of the few bad elements out there. I have bought and profited from some very good products sold from these types of sales pages. What's the problem anyway, as long as there is a genuine refund policy in place for if the customer doesn't like the product.
You suck at design and convincing people that they should buy your book. Why are you selling your book for $37.99 if you have A million dollar code and you earn $1.5k/day? Makes no logic to me, this old trick doesn't work anymore, think something new
I have to agree with airwave. The logic is way out there. You need to rethink about the site and make some changes.