Please review my new site

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  2. CJnQA

    CJnQA Peon

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    Well, for what it is, it's clean and easy on the eye, good color scheme... but...

    It looks like a million other, 40-mile long sales page templates. I, for one, am getting really sick of them.

    Take a look at what digi member, mrflournoy, did at his site:
    AdSenseRockstar.com

    ~cj
     
    CJnQA, Dec 20, 2008 IP
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    Yeah man, try to add a nav bar and instead of having "titles" just add a few new pages instead. It sharpens the site up and is WAY less confusing for the user.

    Good luck.
     
    dPaquin, Dec 20, 2008 IP
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    I like the logo, and the blue. But you should shorten the content on the homepage and stick to formal text. Bright text is used too often on the homepage which (may) automatically give away its a site for advertising/sales.

    Keep up the work :)
     
    danjake, Dec 21, 2008 IP
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    Oh dear, looks like another one of those copycat webpages. Sorry dude I only appreciate actual websites with unique content and multiple pages.......
     
    Flashnest, Dec 21, 2008 IP
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    the background is not helping, try using another color, a bright one, and the blue on the header is nice but the effect isnt it reminds me somehow of denim, overall is "ok" but you need to blend the contents so it is more armonious.
     
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    The content is good and I like the testimonial at the bottom of the page however,
    the template looks a bit generic you should get a more unique template for the site.
     
    kingofsanda, Dec 21, 2008 IP
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    Looks great.. in the body section can you use some live color instead of gray i think so then i will look more good. :)
     
    semvalley, Dec 21, 2008 IP
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