Please review my new service website

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    shahidusman, Feb 1, 2011 IP
  2. music legend

    music legend Well-Known Member

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    i think its a pretty solid design. should do well
     
    music legend, Feb 1, 2011 IP
  3. featurex

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    nice template only thing that still need a little work from my point of view is the logo.

    - first i would remove the shadow
    - also i would try some different fonts
     
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  5. shahidusman

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    @featurex
    thanks, I will edit the logo.
     
    shahidusman, Feb 1, 2011 IP
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    nice design buddy keep it up
     
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  8. shahidusman

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    @timpjack
    thanks :)
     
    shahidusman, Feb 1, 2011 IP
  9. XGooooogle

    XGooooogle Greenhorn

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    Some thoughts:
    - the banner at the top of the page really is HUGE! I strongly recommend making it smaller
    - the text headers in the boxes are not centered properly,
    - the main text is centered and should not be
    - i think your header text is too big and looks like you are yelling
    - use the same font for 'you are welcome...' as you do for 'specials' and 'links' although be careful about using 'nice' looking font as they are not always universal ie. they don't always get reproduced ok in people's browsers
    - edit your main text to make it more visually appealing ... it looks like a lot of text and people online don't read but scan

    hope this helps,
     
    XGooooogle, Feb 2, 2011 IP
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    I appreciate the content, and the design is simple and informative. However, I think you could probably add some excitement.. maybe a unique font used briefly for impact.
     
    vertygo, Feb 2, 2011 IP
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    you have to put some picture, because it make people dont want to read
    some picture make people interest to read
     
    anitaviera, Feb 2, 2011 IP
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    Good Work, also you should take anitaviera's advice. Pictures speaks louder then words. I read the first link and went on to the next page.
     
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    nice site and good job mate :
     
    gramoz, Feb 3, 2011 IP
  14. shahidusman

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    it is still under consturction. have to add 2 or 3 more pages before i start marketing it.
     
    shahidusman, Feb 4, 2011 IP
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    Its an ok looking website, it will do what you need it for :)
     
    DesignersParadise, Feb 4, 2011 IP
  16. shahidusman

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    thanks! it will serve more like a sales page :)
     
    shahidusman, Feb 4, 2011 IP