Please review my new sales page!

Hey,

I was just wondering if somebody could review my new sales page,

http://www.thestealthymillionaire.com,

I have been working around with colors and where the content should be and I think i have got it right, let me know what i can change to make it better,

thanks

 

It looks pretty cool, I miss the Ferrari though

 

looks awful!

 

It's no bad

 

My initial reaction was that I hated the little character that your using. Honestly, it looks like you've drawn it in MS paint over the space of a couple of minutes. It serves no purpose and undermines the professionalism of your website/product.

Another big worry for me is that there are way too many spelling errors. I'm not being picky here but there are hundreds of really school-boy spelling and grammatical errors which again shows a lack of care and professionalism.

Hope this was constructive.

Best Wishes,
Jay

 

To add, the screenshots of the check and paypal account should be a better resolution.

 

Not bad at all. Misspelled the word exactly as exatly in one of the headings.

 

Looks Ok

My suggestion is try to make ur page something unique

its looks to a one of many sale pages available on net these days

Please don't feel bad about my review