This is my new sale page and my new eBook pack.... review this sale page please... Adsense package Ashraf.H.M Free Reprint Articles Google Adsense A To Z
I suggest you set a border to the body . Also the box in the middle have bold/thick border, I suggest you set the border to 1px .
It looks very spammy. The design is just like every other sales page, but you have used all of the "Used car" kind of colors that you could. There is not enough information on the product. The only thing that I see is that you are selling yet another adsense ebook, but there is not indication of what information you have in your book that makes it better than the rest, to make me pull out my credit card....the only thing you are telling me is "25 chapters, and 10 questions"..ABOUT WHAT ?! The page itself has no style, it's just words thrown on a page with some boxes in the middle. It looks very dated, like it was made 5 years ago. Last but not least, get someone to help you with your English, because you cannot sell to an English speaking audience with grammatical errors in your copy: "With us you be profissional and achieve great success!!" " This eBook was always my best reference.. Many abstract issues become so clear, and short ways to gain more money, and amazing success." " Many ambitious individuals read this eBook and gain more money... " " ...plus 10 free articles about gaining more money throw Adsense... How Amazing?! " ...and with the diction and spelling errors in the text, it definitely makes your "testimonials" look as if they are faked and you wrote those also, because they have the same errors. This won't do the trick and won't convert any sales. You have to make it better, and use some design techniques, more visual images, more information about the product, a real contact page, privacy policy, and so forth..and why use a free email address for contact when you have your own domain? Sorry that I am so harsh, but would you rather me tell you it's O.K. and then sit there wondering 3 months from now why you haven't made any sales ? It was reviews like this when I first started out that made me realize that I have to get better because web is very dynamic, and those that go the extra mile, make all the money. You have to have the best one. It has to be better than the other 1000 adsense ebook landing pages. You cannot just plop down some words and a product box and call it a landing page...those days are over. Competition is steep and people are out there selling the same product as you and kicking ass. You have to be as good or better than them. Plain and simple. Creating a converting sales page is challenging, but you certainly won't get anywhere copying the spammy style of landing pages from 3 years ago. You will get there, you have to go through the stages and you learn from each one, but I cannot let you walk away from this review thinking that this will fly online. If it makes you feel any better, you have done better than I did when I built my first page...mine completely sucked , but I looked around and saw what was converting and making money and kept going until I got something professional out there...and you will be able to also and then you'll be sitting back one day slappin' around the noobs to get them in shape (just kidding).
The site looks simple. I think you need to change the layout, designs and everything in your site. Add lot of attractive effects into your site.