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I think it's very informative for an affiliate site. Everything that one needs to know can already be seen in one page.
Sorry but this is not good at all. You should change to something much better as it is not clear and with poor formatting, please use a different free template, there are plenty in the market
In the unlikely event that anyone gets to the bottom of the page you'll lose them at we all know there are plenty more - you won't really be limiting access. All those purple screenshots are awful, when was the site made - in the '90s? If you want to have credibility the underlying site has to be professional looking. that sounds like the kind of thing my 14yo would say. Don't insult your customers!
JVZoo looks attractive but you need to change its color scheme. More attraction in template is needed here!
I felt like some money grabber was going to try to rip me off, so I bounced immediately. These type of pages need to die and a new approach is required. Not just in terms of how the page looks, but also the business and ethics.
Blah blah, promise the earth, give people dirt, blah blah. Yet another GRQ landing page with absolutely nothing to recommend it. Do people read more than 1 line of this crap any more? I mean, as soon as I see "Turn $x into [insert stupidly random dollar figure here]!", I click away. Now just watch... he'll make a million off it.
The problem is that it looks like the classical scam site, even if maybe it is not... You should use some template including a left or right menu, a top menu (with voices like "support" "payment proofs" "contact" etc)... this will give a better first impression to the user that will be more interested in learning what you wrote .