Please review my new page design

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    Please review my new page design.

    You don't need to read the article. Just tell me your opinion about the colors and page layout. Also, if the words are easy to read.

    Here is the URL:
    http://www.gospel-mysteries.net/Test.html

    Thank you
     
    billybw, Aug 14, 2009 IP
  2. vik-pipes

    vik-pipes Guest

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    #2
    It's easy to read but will there be just 1 page?
     
    vik-pipes, Aug 14, 2009 IP
  3. 2advance

    2advance Well-Known Member

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    #3
    The page looks not bad but you need to make the title into more effective..
     
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  4. billybw

    billybw Peon

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    #4
    Thanks for the replies. No, this isn't the only page. It's just a test page to test ideas for changing the layout of the real pages on the site.
     
    billybw, Aug 14, 2009 IP
  5. thestrangefruit

    thestrangefruit Active Member

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    #5
    Simple page and simple colors. You should try to actually put a decent cms, logo, and content on there. Over all the feel seems really amateur-ish.
     
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  6. ColdRicePudding

    ColdRicePudding Well-Known Member

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    #6
    Hmm, I don't really like it, it's not really a design if you ask me.. it's just a cream page with a blue border... sorry
     
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  7. celebritymeet

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    #7
    sorry,not very good. not good colours.you should change it
    good luck
     
    celebritymeet, Aug 14, 2009 IP
  8. itis

    itis Peon

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    #8
    yes this right
    you may allow with this comment n make ur test more professional
    good luck :)
     
    itis, Aug 14, 2009 IP
  9. ansus

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    #9
    Sorry, I don't like the design, it's too simple, you need to have header on your site, or you can find free template that suitable to your content.
     
    ansus, Aug 14, 2009 IP
  10. Lono

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    #10
    man its too plain, need work a lot on this..
     
    Lono, Aug 18, 2009 IP
  11. muhammadhassan

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    #11
    its plain ... its old looking ... colors are not doing their job so you need to change them
     
    muhammadhassan, Aug 18, 2009 IP
  12. JDobbsy1987

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    #12
    really needs something to catch the eye, you said no need to read the article but there isnt anything else on there
     
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    #13
    page layout is ok....colors i don't think so...you need something smoother
     
    arnasati, Aug 18, 2009 IP
  14. Bohol

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    #14
    The background is too bare; it hurts my eyes. The font size is too big. You better use Times New Roman or something of that font family.
     
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    #15
    Hello!
    Thou it is a simple page i didn't like the layout it's making site very simple and not attractive. Try using CSS, Make the page more attractive by adding some good header on top which describes your site content and other pages link is placed at bottom can be shifted to left. Title is missing.
     
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    #16
    sory, it's not good design, but I like your content. try another template, I would like to review again...
     
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    #17
    I have looked at you website. The words "Gospel Mysteries" and "Secret Gospels" are pixilated. You put them as images. Search Engines can't read images. Include text please.
    You page is very simple, --- although simple is always better and it loads a lot faster, you might want to add something cool to the website. I would suggest using some free template. I would add color and therefore make the user feel like reading.
    Likes: Simplicity, Matter, Loads fast
    Disliked: Lacks Umph, Lack Images, Lacks Color, Not user friendly
    Good job on your site bud... with a little work it can be a great website.
     
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  18. benjovi

    benjovi Well-Known Member

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    #18
    That's too plain, get me bore in seconds
     
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    #19
    really needs something to catch the eye, you said no need to read the article but there isnt anything else on there
     
    LUCKYLOL, Aug 19, 2009 IP
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    #20
    The background is too bare; it hurts my eyes. The font size is too big. You better use Times New Roman or something of that font family.
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