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Please review my new landing page! Thanks ;)

Discussion in 'Websites' started by Make a perfect site, Apr 7, 2012.

  1. #1
    Hi all,

    The title nearly tells it all. The site is: http://www.chilledlime.com!
    I would like to have a plus query:
    Because this site is a social networking site (or more specifically a debate platform -> [I think none of you heard of something like that before]) the core function of the future site is on preview on the landing page (for better understanding). Just click the "What will a ChilledLime debate look like? Take a sneak peak! Click here!" bit on the right to participate in the preview debate.

    Do you like that preview function? and Overall do you like the landing page?

    Waiting for those awesome reviews! :)

    Thanks in advance!!

    Regards,
    Akos
     
    Make a perfect site, Apr 7, 2012 IP
  2. denisjames

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    I think you should add some design or change the background color. mybe add more content that explains about the site, Q&A etc.
     
    denisjames, Apr 7, 2012 IP
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    #3
    its simple i think u have to work more then it will be more attractive
     
    sam613, Apr 7, 2012 IP
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    #4
    Its clean and professional but you can make many changed to look better you should add more colors and nice header for your landing page so it looks better
     
    webdove, Apr 7, 2012 IP
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    #5
    you should add more content
     
    deohaivan, Apr 7, 2012 IP
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    eprytore Greenhorn

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    #6
    Color combination of your landing page is good biut you should have a better header and logo for your landing page and make fonts little bigger so it looks better
     
    eprytore, Apr 7, 2012 IP
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    #7
    I like the colors of your landing page header and logo are good too but bottom part you should have better footer otherwise its pretty cool
     
    acidwater, Apr 8, 2012 IP
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    #8
    Pretty clean, solid design. Not much I can help you out with there.

    With the substance of the page though, there could be some improvements.

    First of all your landing page lacks an incentive. It can be anything, from a cool "charter member" badge to a 5$ Amazon gift code.

    The second issue is with the expanding graphic. That's a neat trick, but you should tell your audience about it. Simply put "Click here to expand" instead of "Click here".

    If you have a considerable amount of traffic coming in, you could also use a bit of split testing to test out different color schemes and layouts.

    Anyway, good luck with your website.

    Best regards,
    George
     
    geegel, Apr 8, 2012 IP
  9. sam613

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    its very simple i suggest you one thing you have to use more pictures and use good design
     
    sam613, Apr 8, 2012 IP
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    In my opinion your website needs some colors :) Also,may be you should think about adding a video instead of a picture.On the other hand the strenghts are that your sales page is clean,to the point and simple.
     
    Tothepoint05, Apr 9, 2012 IP
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    #11
    I'm liking the concept, and think you could have some really good potential. I like the landing page simplicity, 1 thing keeps jumping out though as not quite right visually, the way the capital L sits in the green oval just appears unbalanced, just my honest opinion.
    Good luck with the site, look forward to seeing it develop
    Regards Tony
     
    ifandesign, Apr 10, 2012 IP
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    Clean site, I like it. Not to much distractions. Would opt for a video as well.
     
    Lieve333, Apr 10, 2012 IP
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    #13
    clean and good ssite
     
    chefwebmister, Apr 10, 2012 IP
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    #14
    add more sweet words mate. so that you can get a lot of emails :D
     
    seovawebservices, Apr 10, 2012 IP
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    #15
    your site is very simple, but good design & nice color.
     
    mattcut27, Apr 11, 2012 IP
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    Looks great. I will be starting a few debates there in the near future ;)
     
    evergreenone, Apr 11, 2012 IP