Please Review My New iPod Website :)

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    I have just finished the redesign of this site. Please do not comment on the amount of content because I have 17,000 words of articles ready to upload, I just havent got around to it yet. Please comment on things such as:
    -The Banner
    -Navigation
    -Pictures
    -Background
    -Layout
    -Font
    -Adsense position
    -Loading time (need to fix)
    -Anything else you can think of.

    Thanks, I would really appreciate some in-depth reviews. My URL is:

    http://www.frozenipod.com/

    forumSEO
     
    forumSEO, May 19, 2007 IP
  2. DeViAnThans3

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    Small review, hoping it will help you a bit :)
    1- Page 'About' has a spelling problem lol: " deticated " should be "dedicated".
    2- The site is brought quite attractive, so thats okay already. About the background on the 2 sides of the webpage: I'ld use something lighter, or make the images a bit more transparant... but that's just my opinion !
    3- The menu bar: Give it another background, so it is easier to read ;) Further the tab style is very nice though!!
    4- The banner is quite well; only thing I would do is make the "FrozenIpod" text an image, and make a real logo of it that way :)

    Further the site is looking quite well. Keep it up!

    Hope this helps a bit - ;)
     
    DeViAnThans3, May 19, 2007 IP
  3. wayner

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    Looks good, hot chicks in small shorts is always a winner, however the other images (of the ipods) are very poor quality and you should look at improving them if poss.
     
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    Thanks for the suggestions. I have fixed the spelling, background and images. I will fix the banner issues when I finalise the links. I would appreciate some more reviews.

    Thanks
     
    forumSEO, May 19, 2007 IP
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    The banner is a bit too plain, why not add in those ipod silhouettes instead? And maybe use a more saturated/brighter aqua blue for the banner's background?
     
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    Overall, it looks pretty good. I really like what you've done with the header, and the main background is nice too. Adds seems to be in a good place, and everything works the way that it should.

    One big problem though is that you have the content pushed right up against the border. It would look better with some space in between the two. 5 pixels or so, nothing major.
     
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    You need some padding for your text in the MAIN body. It is too close to the border.
     
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