Please Review my new E-book website

Discussion in 'Websites' started by supernerd3705, May 14, 2008.

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    Hey everyone,

    I just finished writing my first e-book and building the webpage for it here Money From Proxies. I would love your feedback on what you think of the site. Thanks in advance
     
    supernerd3705, May 14, 2008 IP
  2. kingofsanda

    kingofsanda Peon

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    The site looks nice, it's very informative I really like the header.
     
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    Yeah I cant take too much credit for that. I used a template. But I am going to be offering about 50 free proxy templates on the site once I get all of them built.
     
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    TwistOffMedia Well-Known Member

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    Good site, good luck selling :)
     
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    The page is way too "wide" and there's too many gaps. You need to condense it more and have the product stand out more of what you're selling.
     
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    Thanks for the feedback. Bobbylove what do you mean the site is too wide? How would you suggest making the product stand out more? I was trying to do it in such a way as to give the user plenty of information on the product without pushing the book on them too heavily. This way letting them make an informed decision if they really want to buy it or not. Let me know your suggestions please.
     
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    geegel Well-Known Member

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    Mate, the only thing that your casual readers will notice will be the lack of a price and the lack of an order button. Now I know that you have a purchase link in the left column, but an average reader will skim through the thing and expect to see a price and an order button at the end of the sales copy.

    Otherwise the copy itself could use a revamp, but that's the stuff I usually get paid for, so no feedback there :D.


    Regards, George
     
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  8. supernerd3705

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    Good point I will add a for sale button on the homepage. Thank you
     
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    the market of ebook is competetive in keyword point of view..u have to invest lots for marketing purpose
     
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    Yeah I already started an adwords campaign so I will see how that works. In the meantime I am going to start offering free templates on the site. It is just going to take me a couple days to get them operational.
     
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