Please review my new clothing website :)

Discussion in 'Websites' started by banks1, Apr 3, 2008.

  1. hg4x4

    hg4x4 Peon

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    #2
    initial thought, the front page font is very hard to read, lots of words
    get rid of the "powered by zen cart" top banner, have someone design one for you

    you might consider having someone design a custom cart template for you too, right now it looks kind of plain
     
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    #3
    you are obviously outside US....because those vendors don't allow anyone but the major retailers sell those styles....not even knockoffs. I too think the writing is too small. I think the layout is ok. Good luck. Speed was good.
     
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  3. river

    river Active Member

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    #4
    I would right justify the text in the body of the site and I don't think it needs to be bold. Also, the zencart logo (which shouldn't be covering that image) is more prominent than the title of your site.The site title should stand out. I would also experiment with different fonts.

    Good Luck
     
    river, Apr 3, 2008 IP
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    Suckerpunch Well-Known Member

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    I'd make the site wider.. looks kind of cramped. I agree with the font comments as well.
     
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    #6
    I may be way off base, but here are my observations.

    Make the page a little bit wider.
    Your website looks too much like a sales pitch (I understand its a shopping cart, but its overwhelming)
    I agree with the above posts about the fonts

    You may want to consider having a custom template designed. Pictures make or break a site. If it doesn't look "clean and crisp", I worry about how legitimate the business is.

    I may be way off base. I hope everything works out!
     
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    camp185 Well-Known Member

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    It needs a lot a help. Very narrow, all your text is centered, and good luck selling something with this GIANT paragraph on your home page:

     
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  7. banks1

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    camp185, thanks for your honest. But what is exactly wrong with that paragraph. The reason I have placed it is because I do not have all products in all sizes, and there does not appear to be an option in ZenCart for customers to be able to select size.
     
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    #9
    Put away the box Languages. There is no need for one.
     
    marin, Apr 4, 2008 IP