Please review my new blog.

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  2. whirlybird20

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    Has no one got anything to say about it?
     
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    #3
    I didn't read the who page but I noticed a typo and a grammatical
    error you should get someone to proofread your content. In the first
    line of the first post you have the word previus which should be previous.

    At the bottom of your second post you have: "It a brilliant way to
    organize your images." It should be It's a brilliant way to
    organize your images.

    The layout is not bad but I think the blog would look better if
    you had a more original theme.
     
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    Thanks! I will go and correct those errors. I type at 80wpm and don't usualy have much time to go through it.
     
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    tigrrra Well-Known Member

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    #5
    its ok it needs a unique design
     
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    I am working on that. I just wanted to use this one to get it started.
     
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    #7
    maybe work on the design to make it more interesting but I think a great start
     
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    #8
    Also needs a logo i think...
     
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    Ok. I will work on one of them soon.
     
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    Hi,

    I think the side looks like fine.
     
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    #11
    Nice and simple, I like that white background color. Like others suggested, I think you need a logo.
     
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    #12
    Thanks for the comments. My favorite colors are white, black, and red so this theme was great for me.

    I will try to make an even better one sometime. I hope you find the content useful. I have a lot of great posts lined up, and some of them are about more then link building. I will soon go into more general marketing, and also website design, etc.

    Thanks again!
     
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    I think it can be better, especially the logo. Your header is too common and plain.
     
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    rdthewall Active Member

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    #14
    Colour combinations can be improved.
     
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    #15
    very simple design but everything shows right.. might want to leave it like that if you like simple designs!
     
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    I like it like that for now anyway, but will come up with a logo for it soon.
     
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    Really nice. I like the colors and it loads fast.
     
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    #18
    Hmm .. i am also wordpress user .. well your theme is quite simple one .. and try placing ads after posts title ... !
     
    Mandar, Sep 14, 2008 IP
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    New logo but a good start.
     
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    I don't want it to have too many ads, but then again, I haven't yet got any clicks from the ones on the sidebar, and I have had over 260 his in the last two days. So I will consider it. I have tried signing up to text-link-ads.com, but they won't accept my site because apparently they don't think it is getting enough traffic.
     
    whirlybird20, Sep 14, 2008 IP