Please review my mmorpg browsergame

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by user099, Nov 21, 2009.

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    user099, Nov 21, 2009 IP
  2. ferdyfauzi

    ferdyfauzi Peon

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    Nice one! but I think the font in the middle of the page is small. Could u change it to something bigger?
     
    ferdyfauzi, Nov 21, 2009 IP
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    Make center are little bigger otherwise everything is looking perfect accordign to me.
     
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    defiantly dark and evil I like it.
     
    ejones222, Nov 22, 2009 IP
  5. user099

    user099 Active Member

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    thanks for all your comments.
     
    user099, Nov 22, 2009 IP
  6. articledirectory

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    your homepage image citypic.jpg is stolen from the bitefight city page, i would consider using/creating unique images to avoid any copyright infringement...
     
    articledirectory, Nov 29, 2009 IP
  7. kingsoflegend

    kingsoflegend Well-Known Member

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    I suggest you run the game description through a spell checker and grammar checker.
     
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    Very nice though couple of spelling errors. I think the site has real potential.
     
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    kingsoflegend Well-Known Member

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    I think I counted 6 spelling errors in the first 2 paragraphs... and a couple grammar mistakes and missing punctuation on several occasions.
     
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    netdriver788 Well-Known Member

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    The header design impressed me a lot and need to align the whole template to center.
     
    netdriver788, Nov 30, 2009 IP