Please Review My Make Money Online Article

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  1. sarahk

    sarahk iTamer Staff

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    I'll start with basic "conventions of language" in the first sentence where wealthy affiliate should be Wealthy Affiliate if that is the name of a program or company.

    Really, by your third sentence you want me to start doubting the program? I hadn't even thought it might be dodgy. I thought you were talking about something you trust
    I get to the end and you say there's going to be a link but there isn't, you just get a rate my article widget and a stack of revolting fleshy ads for other articles.
    All in all it's a pretty uninspired article. I really don't get much of a sense of where the affiliate program is going to add value to any independant website building I might do. I'd start over.
     
    sarahk, Mar 30, 2016 IP