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Please Review My Logo Design

Discussion in 'Design' started by saeed dameer, Jul 21, 2016.

  1. #1
    hi

    i'm still training and i design first logo ,so i need your feedback to improve my self

    https://www.behance.net/gallery/40854285/Abraj-Almohandes-Logo

    and Thank you
    SEMrush
     
    saeed dameer, Jul 21, 2016 IP
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    IG2010 Well-Known Member

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    I really like it and the way you demonstrate his creation is quality, well done
     
    IG2010, Aug 1, 2016 IP
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    #3
    This is really quality site,really good job.
     
    Froggys, Aug 1, 2016 IP
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    saeed dameer Peon

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    Thank you so much guys, You inspired me
     
    saeed dameer, Aug 1, 2016 IP
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    Ian08 Well-Known Member

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    Frankly speaking, the current version doesn't catch my eyes. Precisely, I don't quite understand what those curves mean. I believe every part of a logo has its own meaning. Could you briefly explain the meaning of those curves?
     
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    Ian08 Well-Known Member

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    @StSignal,

    Not sure if I made an mistake in my wording, but what I wanted to say is that I think the current version is average, not that I like curves.

    I'm not a native English speaker after all. If my wording was inappropriate, please let me know.
     
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    Ian08, Aug 2, 2016 IP
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    I really like that, you did it very well!
     
    willmore83, Aug 3, 2016 IP
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    #8
    I really like this design!
     
    Grace Bonner, Aug 3, 2016 IP
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    I am not a graphic designer, but I like your job.
     
    Alex July, Aug 4, 2016 IP
  10. saeed dameer

    saeed dameer Peon

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    #10
    no meaning for curves
    just for show more beautiful

    no mistake, thanks for your feedback
    and can you give some advices to be better?

    Thank you so much guys, your comments inspired me
     
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    saeed dameer, Aug 5, 2016 IP
  11. Ian08

    Ian08 Well-Known Member

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    I understand. So the curves are for beautifying. Yet, I don't know if it's because I don't have the artistic talent, but personally I'm unable to feel the beautifulness of the curves. This is just my personal opinion though.

    I'm not a designer so my advice might not be accurate, but I think the logo of a construction firm is supposed to look majestic, spectacular, and impressive. Currently the curves don't seem to give that impression.
     
    Ian08, Aug 5, 2016 IP
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    I am absolutely amazed with the design.
     
    Froggys, Aug 10, 2016 IP
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    saeed dameer Peon

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    Thank You So Much
     
    saeed dameer, Aug 10, 2016 IP
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    sarahk iTamer Staff

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    I'd be interested to see it with the curves going the other way. I expected the "S" to mean something. Turn it around and it may be clear that they're just lines.
     
    sarahk, Aug 10, 2016 IP
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    Your a really great designer! Excellent!
     
    76designs, Aug 10, 2016 IP
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    saeed dameer Peon

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    it's meaningless, i just add S to be more beauty
    Thank you so much , you're post inspired me

    Sorry for the delay response but i couldn't open internet in the last two weeks
     
    saeed dameer, Aug 23, 2016 IP
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    sarahk iTamer Staff

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    That was my point - it means nothing but people expect it to... so turn it around so it doesn't look like an S
     
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    really thank you so much for your feedback and i will try to do something about it
     
    saeed dameer, Aug 24, 2016 IP
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    sipltech Well-Known Member

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    Your design is good, you are beginner and I wish you scale-up to next level of logo designing. An advice from my side: Try to create a logo which have some meaning, check Amazon's logo, though it is a popular brand and easily recognizable, they have definitive meaning. The Arrow in logo is smiley and starts with A and end at Z, this means they have everything from A2Z.

    Try not to create a meaningless logo until it is a creative art, rather than add value to your work by learning more innovative ways to improve your designing skills.
     
    sipltech, Aug 27, 2016 IP
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    thank you so much i will try to improve myself and in the next time i will focus on meaning for logo
    Thanks again
     
    saeed dameer, Sep 3, 2016 IP