hi i'm still training and i design first logo ,so i need your feedback to improve my self https://www.behance.net/gallery/40854285/Abraj-Almohandes-Logo and Thank you
Frankly speaking, the current version doesn't catch my eyes. Precisely, I don't quite understand what those curves mean. I believe every part of a logo has its own meaning. Could you briefly explain the meaning of those curves?
@StSignal, Not sure if I made an mistake in my wording, but what I wanted to say is that I think the current version is average, not that I like curves. I'm not a native English speaker after all. If my wording was inappropriate, please let me know.
no meaning for curves just for show more beautiful no mistake, thanks for your feedback and can you give some advices to be better? Thank you so much guys, your comments inspired me
I understand. So the curves are for beautifying. Yet, I don't know if it's because I don't have the artistic talent, but personally I'm unable to feel the beautifulness of the curves. This is just my personal opinion though. I'm not a designer so my advice might not be accurate, but I think the logo of a construction firm is supposed to look majestic, spectacular, and impressive. Currently the curves don't seem to give that impression.
I'd be interested to see it with the curves going the other way. I expected the "S" to mean something. Turn it around and it may be clear that they're just lines.
it's meaningless, i just add S to be more beauty Thank you so much , you're post inspired me Sorry for the delay response but i couldn't open internet in the last two weeks
That was my point - it means nothing but people expect it to... so turn it around so it doesn't look like an S
Your design is good, you are beginner and I wish you scale-up to next level of logo designing. An advice from my side: Try to create a logo which have some meaning, check Amazon's logo, though it is a popular brand and easily recognizable, they have definitive meaning. The Arrow in logo is smiley and starts with A and end at Z, this means they have everything from A2Z. Try not to create a meaningless logo until it is a creative art, rather than add value to your work by learning more innovative ways to improve your designing skills.
thank you so much i will try to improve myself and in the next time i will focus on meaning for logo Thanks again