Please review my landing pages and overall site quality.

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  2. LeftSideBurn

    LeftSideBurn Member

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    Too much eye candy and way too busy. What about the presell? It wants me to signup at the top of the page for something that I know nothing about, including the brand. Only when I scroll down below my viewable area of the screen, if I don't already click my back button, then I see content to tell me about the product.

    It all looks like a hard-sell. The only thing missing is the "As Seen On TV" logo.

    WC
     
    LeftSideBurn, Apr 6, 2009 IP
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    2advance Well-Known Member

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    Nice site, try to display the title in some other effective way. The image is loading little bit slow, check it out..
     
    2advance, Apr 7, 2009 IP
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    Don't use those pop ups, it hurts your reputation. If a person is closing the page, they already decided they don't want anything to do with your product.

    Is very loud, too much going on at the same time. Consider making it a bit simpler.

    This one is better, however at the top there really isn't anything that comes screams, "Hey you need to buy this!" Also is that picture of stool really necessary? I fear it may scare potential customers away...

    I like this one, only thing I would change is that purple font, its a little to bold, all the words smudge together.
     
    CrimsoniteX, Apr 7, 2009 IP